Poetry chain/collab: in the back of my mind

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Wed Aug 08, 2007 11:43 pm

We've decided that we gonna do a poetry chain callabo, basically, we choose a topic, someone drops on that topic, and the next poet carries on from where the last poet left off, we keep it going for as long as possible...

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Subject of this chain collab: in the back of my mind
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Wed Aug 08, 2007 11:44 pm

In the back of my mind

There is no concept of time

Only memories as soldiers on the frontline

Standing firm

Forcing me to learn

From mistakes in the past

Screaming at me for as long as a timeless moment can last

There's no sunshine

Only shadows in the dark

Demons in the dark

Me

In

The

Dark

In the back of my mind

There is no such relieving concept as

Time...
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Thu Aug 09, 2007 12:30 am

[quote name="PoomPoom"]



into me .. i see hidden behind the shadows of doubt

hidden behind the shadows of my shadow is true greatness

harnessed by my womanhood and my intimacy.

into me .. i see what words trail and lazy minds fail to see....

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[quote name="Serious Jokers Ent"]In the back of my mind

There is no concept of time

Only memories as soldiers on the frontline

Standing firm

Forcing me to learn

From mistakes in the past

Screaming at me for as long as a timeless moment can last

There's no sunshine

Only shadows in the dark

Demons in the dark

Me

In

The

Dark

In the back of my mind

There is no such relieving concept as ..[/quote]

somewhere beyond the mental duplicity lies what life is truly about

almost forbidden, seems the approach to ones true innateness

often caressed in dreams between heartbeats, too often lost to perpetuity

but the way is scribed in the shadows of our poetry

into me ... into me ... into me

strike the anvil, and the peal delves like a chasm of light

through tha dark void of palpitations in the matrix of life

cutting deep into the whimsical facade, those who stumble through

in epiphany, come face to face with the simplicity of the truth

they shuck off the shackles of insignificance, of loins and wombs

crack the code of death, thorns and the hollow coldness of tombs

a reckoning, a realization, sheer prose exposes the nexus

when I close my eyes and can read it aloud

the meaningless falls away like rain from the clouds

within the mist the light strikes the prism

revealing the rainbow bounded by darkness .. its schism

somewhere a clock ticks, it's rhythm off by a hair

pulling me back to that abnormal-normal, a life I despair

back to the back of my mind, the division lies there

tick, tock, tick, tock .. I see the back of the demons eyes

they are a reflection of me in my minds own eyes

I can't scream, these are my own shadows

vestiges of some penultimate meaning that really doesn't matter

I'm drawn back across the gap in a frenzy, a rat caught in a maze

tick, tock, ti.., tick, tock ... I long for the next dream

between heartbeats ... into me ... into me ... into me
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Thu Aug 09, 2007 10:29 am

In my mind,Illusion has been created but at the back of it,reality resides undiluted

It's bleek at the back of my mind so I let Illusion luminate my pathway to reality

at the back,I relax in earth's reality,in the absence of illusion,I gain utmost clarity

it's lonely back here,so I get to the front where everybody is,where illusion is the norm

life's worm,from prehistoric events distorted and transfixed man since his life form

the front of our minds is where we've been made used to,the back is meant for psychos

Psychos! That's coz they are in a region the front-minded humans hardly reside

I try to lure men to the back but they so front-fixed they find it hard to decide

so I go... to the back of my mind leaving the front door open for easy exit

Life is for the living understand it better if you living,'the back' you should visit

Had to go free on this...someone continue

ONELOVE
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Thu Aug 09, 2007 7:37 pm

ah, i just got back from work, and im glad to see people have jumped on this, now let me keystyle something up quick, ghostic has sparked an idea in the back of my mind, :D

In the back of my mind,

is a lump of creativity surrounded by skeletal confines,

where thoughts take flight and combine,

forming the fundemental foundation of my perception,

in this dangeriously deadly world of deception,

the masses are lead by the mislead leaders,

and greed is, considered religious,

finding it amusing producing confusion, forming illusions,

in the back of our minds, we need to read the signs,

the subliminal criminal uses the media as thier weapon in this day and time,

so thats why, i keep on my toes in this broken age of deception,

giving society the "finger" as a token of my perception,

think more then twice at what starts up in the back of your mind,,,,
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Fri Aug 10, 2007 1:10 pm

Kast 1:
think more then twice at what starts up in the back of your mind,,,,
think more then twice at what starts up in the back of my mind?

at the back of my mind i DONT think, CANT think

ideas created in the time of a blink

thats where formations take place, reality concieved

where i define who i be, the only place nobody sees

in the front of my mind is where words are crafted and smoothened

in the back is the war zone, where battles are fought

where my many alter egos put on armour & try take over me

where angels & demons fight to try to control me

where i choose to be the nice guy indeed on the next door serial killer

where i give you a hug but say f*ck you at the same time

where i dream of being what society wont accept

coz somewhere between the back and the front my SELF gets diluted

somewhere in the middle kalaedescopes of gray kill my bright thoughts

what i jot down now, honestly you'll never know

if its truly, really, from the back of my mind.
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Fri Aug 10, 2007 2:14 pm

In the back of my mind i try to unblind

the invizible eye that lies in the blank of their minds

in the back of my mind i try to blind my eye from what lies b4 it

A reality so harsh yet true; forcing I to xplore it

4 what my eye seeks is truth and what my eye sees

my tongue cant hide

Tho time never lied

I refuse to swallow the gruesome contents

prematurely ejaculated by the head of time

Standing at the testicles of time

I try to abort what time has already conceived

My future revealed by these gruesome contents

I was bound by the curse and forced to nurse

The maternal wounds of a seed involuntary planted

In the back of my mind

In back of my mind I illicitly arm my tongue

to plant this seed of time in the blank of their minds
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Fri Aug 10, 2007 2:21 pm

:oops: Gosh i hope i dint mess t up, But damn yo; the way ya Kats jas flipped it.

Mad stuff, just inticed me to key a lil sum.
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Fri Aug 10, 2007 10:13 pm

[quote name="Ghostic"]In my mind,Illusion has been created but at the back of it,reality resides undiluted

It's bleek at the back of my mind so I let Illusion luminate my pathway to reality

at the back,I relax in earth's reality,in the absence of illusion,I gain utmost clarity

:D DAEM! IS ALL I CAN SAY. :D

IS JUS' ME: A SUNRISE DA COLOUR OF NITE
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Mon Aug 13, 2007 7:26 pm

In the back of my mind

The past is calling but its on silence mode.

The future is locked, Super powers neglect the security code.

Subsistence economy is cold, now they be warming the globe.

My moms de-energised she no longer uphold the load. (moms =mother nature)

From the past through the present to the future.

Compared to Tomorrow yesterday looks cuter.

At the ripe of civilisation the future looks grim and

Over cooked. time hangs heavy on earth.

In the back of my mind

We living on borrowed time

Im not deep but Im high 6'9"
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