Two Thousand and Infinite

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theme elohim
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Mon Jan 21, 2008 2:34 pm

Hello to all poetry fanatics. Its been a long time since I last checked in and a lot has happened since then. I'm sorry I did not have time to check the new posts, I promise to do so as soon as I get another Z$750 000 for thirty minutes on the net. I just thought I should freestyle sum' that would keep me coming a lot more regularly this time...

Two thousand and infinite,

that year when it was ordained by priests

that a new moon should not be disturbed

by the rising sun,

When a dog taking a piss against the trunk of some old tree

would quench its thirst

with the same water

from a puddle which gave it strength

to soil the bark of yet another centuries old breed of tree.

Two thousand and infinite

when the world chokes from climate changes,

yet newly borns are still ushered into the gutters

to eke out an existence from the dying minutes

of a once chaste island.

Two thousand and eight

when many wait to be made immortal

to taste infinity,

in a world doomed to die,

yet renewed by the warm breath of a new poet

breathing against the fogged window

of a vanished, yet enduring existence.

Stay inspired dAUGHTERS AND SONS OF THIS INFINITE LAND...
Nu'Rudeen
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Mon Jan 21, 2008 5:31 pm

*Sighs heavily* Hmmmmmm.......

My third eye is opened once again

As my blood seeps out with the rain

Onto a scribes page

who has been lost for more than an age

But is back with infinite blessings

once more

the student Lotuses for more of the Gurus lessons

welcome back god :D
Poetic Seraph
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Wed Jan 23, 2008 6:47 pm

woooow. where have u been all this time. I see 2 great poets come back at the same time, Nu'rudeen and Theme. I've missed ur masterworks and here u go, blessing AHH with another masterwork. what a freestyle. i got nothig but good things to say about this piece. love it!
Xblaze
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Wed Jan 23, 2008 11:25 pm

sup Theme, dope as usual..

that thirty minutes stuff 4 real? shakes head in empathy....
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Thu Jan 24, 2008 11:06 am

THANK U FOR COMING [/size]THRU 2 THE SLAM !

N'way i echo Xblaze and Poetic Seraph's sentiments.Nu'Rudeen couldnt have expressed

it any better. this is JAS so thot electrifying.

keep ink-spiring.
theme elohim
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Sat Jan 26, 2008 9:28 am

Thanks for being sarcastic Miss Concrete Extreme. I meant to come but i was held up for stupid reasons. Much love y'all, we have the greatest network of dedicated poets as i experienced in my previous times on AHH. We should carry the flame threough the roughest of hailstorms. Thanks for the love, will get more money later today to read all your stuff gods and godesses. :wink:
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Sat Feb 16, 2008 12:31 am

sup dude, its been a long ass minute... you still inking thought provoking and masterful poetry... you have a mind worthy of praise... this piece was inspiring... i miss the old AHH... though i have found a new "cyber home", i still have love for AHH...

peace
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Sat Mar 15, 2008 11:50 pm

Near 2000 and infinite

When Mugabe ordained landrights to his grandsons who drove the farmers off the land and in the end, inflation he couldn’t ment as it rose to 2000 and infinite.

2008

When gold reached 1000 while just staying in a reserve safewhile petrol needs to be reserved as oil rises above a hundred and platinum grows handsome as it costs a sum of 2000 and beyond finite

2008

When the last SA government uses the gate to the gravytrain station, the finance minister fixed further funds for child grants to subsidise child bearing of children who are deaf of hearing because they will follow sute on their teenage parents line of not wearing a corporate suit but, they aim to benefit from socialism by having a suite of sweet daughters amounting to 2000 and infinite Rand a month.
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