meditashun

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kudzie
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Tue Dec 11, 2007 10:02 am

My mind'sight feeds off the force in speed

to rid the earth of its greed

its need to succeed lies dormant

these kids that roam the streets high on weed

yes indeed at times i plead

with the powers that be to feed the soul that needs

i circumnavigate to reach these heights

browse the net to read these bytes

thoughts connect to realise the mind's intellect

switch circuits to deliver these codes intact

time bombs detonate, time passes

magnetic pulses come to recollect

and then i start to meditate
XCAPEE
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Wed Dec 19, 2007 12:00 am

[quote name="kudzie"]My mind'sight feeds off the force in speed

to rid the earth of its greed

its need to succeed lies dormant

these kids that roam the streets high on weed

yes indeed at times i plead

with the powers that be to feed the soul that needs

i circumnavigate to reach these heights

browse the net to read these bytes

thoughts connect to realise the mind's intellect

switch circuits to deliver these codes intact

time bombs detonate, time passes

magnetic pulses come to recollect

and then i start to meditate[/quote]

LIKED THE RHYMES OF THIS PIECE..

NICE PIECE

KEEP IT UP

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pyrotechnic
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Thu Dec 27, 2007 3:17 pm

beautiful stuff my brother keep on blessing is
pyrotechnic
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Thu Dec 27, 2007 3:19 pm

beautiful stuff my brother keep on blessing us
eizzy.k
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Sun Aug 31, 2008 9:28 pm

Damn! Meditashun is what i cum on here to do as well

I love poems like dis, wud lve 2 c mo of dem on here

it was all tyt flow,

Respect
ralstone15
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Sun Aug 31, 2008 9:50 pm

great piece. i think it time for us to make a change. it starts here. good job!
Dark Prince
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Mon Sep 01, 2008 7:12 am

After reading this I have seen "browse the net to read these bytes.. " is inspiration on how to write, and since i'm new at writing online I think this post should help me greatly
ralstone15
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Tue Sep 02, 2008 1:58 am

sorry, i made the wrong post for the wrong poem. (the last post i did here)

this is a beautiful piece though. i wish i had that talent to rhyme like that!
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