MORTAL QUESTIONS

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vnorm
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Tue Nov 27, 2007 9:17 am

Blame the devil that he made ye sin.

Blame Christ for the medicine.

maybe it just aint disease,

Power on your hands it is.

We could'nt argue, so we coined phrases

confessed as faithless.

Thoughts of Armageddon still scares me still.

Steel scares me not coz of what it denies me,

but what it ushers me to.

Maybe the things said by the pastors is true;

'You want life, the answer's in you-

flesh or spirit?'

Which am I? third entity?

Yet selfish the flesh is, tells me the crucifixion news is fiction.

Jesus's true depiction.

/

Assume no spirit, (soul?)

and cork my ears with cowardly defiance?

How am i to stay afloat, powered by the fire?
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Tue Nov 27, 2007 8:09 pm

[quote name="vnorm"]Blame the devil that he made ye sin.

Blame Christ for the medicine.

[/quote]

Nice poetry,but I think it needs co-ordination...it would make it more meaninful.

Welcome poet.
brooks
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Tue Dec 11, 2007 1:14 pm

[quote name="vnorm"]Blame the devil that he made ye sin.

Blame Christ for the medicine.

maybe it just aint disease,

Power on your hands it is.

We could'nt argue, so we coined phrases

confessed as faithless.

Thoughts of Armageddon still scares me still.

Steel scares me not coz of what it denies me,

but what it ushers me to.

Maybe the things said by the pastors is true;

'You want life, the answer's in you-

flesh or spirit?'

Which am I? third entity?

Yet selfish the flesh is, tells me the crucifixion news is fiction.

Jesus's true depiction.

/

Assume no spirit, (soul?)

and cork my ears with cowardly defiance?

How am i to stay afloat, powered by the fire?[/quote]

ghostic's kind of right, a lil bit of more coordination. but nice thoughts u have there! cheers!
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