MY MIND'S SIGHT

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kudzie
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Thu Nov 15, 2007 1:34 pm

Deep in meditation i search the situation to find what's missing

Men's spirit longs for a healing without feeling

I see lost souls sinking yet feeding on elevated perceptions

I find healing scribling on painted walls to keep siblings of thought

I zoom through the earth's lot

And the while i plot

It points on the earth's surface

Its hills and seas combine to form its field

In its depth lies planted seeds to yield its shield

Far across its length and face cries men's existence to curse its birth

It has never been as foes take the scene

Wars scotch the green

Sin takes over the mind

Nature is kind but man is blind

By and large i cast my thoughts

Wide pictures slide,darkness ignites

And then i start to feel inside deep in my mind

It cuts like blades of grass and splints of shattered glass
unheard voice
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Thu Nov 15, 2007 2:06 pm

This is beautiful! As I was reading I found myself feeling

at one with myself because it seems as if these

feelings are my own. Before I became apart of AHH, I

could never really find anyone who could write like

you guys do. I love the fact that I have found a place

where it seems that I belong.
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Thu Nov 15, 2007 5:25 pm

"Nature is kind but man is blind " I damn near fell out my seat when I read that line. I like, I like.
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Fri Nov 16, 2007 7:23 pm

Gosh i feel, so F**ed up right now, jas had to retreat to some poetry. I dont know if

the word beautiful correctly defines the piece. It gat depth, realy

deep, funny how it sorta matches the state im in at the mo. Love the work
Deep in meditation i search the situation to find what's missing

Men's spirit longs for a healing without feeling

I find healing scribling on painted walls to keep siblings of thought

Far across its length and face cries men's existence to curse its birth

It has never been as foes take the scene

Wars scotch the green

Sin takes over the mind

Nature is kind but man is blind
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Wed Jul 16, 2008 6:43 pm

Deep in meditation i search the situation to find what's missing

Men's spirit longs for a healing without feeling

I see lost souls sinking yet feeding on elevated perceptions

I find healing scribling on painted walls to keep siblings of thought
Eh!, Eh!, Eh!??..who else read that?!!

And this?!
Sin takes over the mind

Nature is kind but man is blind
Am sorry guys but I jus' had to up this one, because I can't imagine where this guy (kudzie) stood while writin' this!!...Deeymn, this is deep!!!
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Fri Jul 18, 2008 2:17 pm

[quote name="kudzie"]Deep in meditation i search the situation to find what's missing

Men's spirit longs for a healing without feeling

I see lost souls sinking yet feeding on elevated perceptions[/quote]

These first three lines were my favourite, the rest of the the piece was still dope, full of insight of your inner sight!
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Fri Jul 18, 2008 6:01 pm

Wow! this is seriously good, the word play and insight of this poem are just mentaly elevating. no doubt zimbabwean poets are wise
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Sun Aug 10, 2008 12:20 am

i read it the first time and sat with my mouth open. then i had to read it at loud, just to confirm that the flow of this poem is so on point. it's very beautiful, i'm guessing u wrote this while still being deep in meditation
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