..kill me with kindness...

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intel
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Fri Oct 12, 2007 4:29 pm

i still dont title poems... so heres another one.

i havent decided if

i should finish it or leave it as is.

let me know what you all think

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pain is love is war, and youre killing me with kindness

he who says a pictures worth a thousand words seems to be the wisest,

ive seen a thousand pictures, of you and i, thousands of kisses...

but only "death " comes to mind followed by drowning whispers.

...lets hush the mistress word...because they say that sinister curves

symbolize satans degenerate slurs...

if so, why every time we speak the tongue slithers and swerves?

is this " his" work?...is "he" reason since swords and spears

monetary status has intergrated with mating seasons to cause avarice and torment peers?

route of all evil is the love for money? or the love of being loved.

is it the meat the lion inside us fights for? or the pride in feeding his cub?

he who "makes the bacon"... bestow the smiles:

though a slave to satan, do he necessarily skoal to vile?

or be just a hopeless child....at which you aim your spears,

i rever god, but you pseudos claim religions because its only based on fear..

i adore the lord... but the thought of dying for love scares me:

to death. i live carefree , till someone launches the "L "word, my heart palpitates; barely...

so pain....is love.... is war.... and youre killing me with kindness.....

im willing to die for " my country" ...so for you... i lay.. lifeless
Realist
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Fri Oct 12, 2007 6:41 pm

Intel you doin ya thing. "...lets hush the mistress word...because they say that sinsister curves symbolize satans degenerate slurs..." Fresh. I like it
Xblaze
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Tue Oct 16, 2007 10:51 pm

still on point with the multies.. dope piece intel.

if i wus to title this, it'll be,

"this love; the battle of my fears" lol, simple huh.
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Wed Oct 17, 2007 2:04 am

[quote name="intel"]



...lets hush the mistress word...because they say that sinister curves

symbolize satans degenerate slurs...

if so, why every time we speak the tongue slithers and swerves?

is it the meat the lion inside us fights for? or the pride in feeding his cub?

he who "makes the bacon"... bestow the smiles:

though a slave to satan, do he necessarily skoal to vile?

or be just a hopeless child....at which you aim your spears,

i rever god, but you pseudos claim religions because its only based on fear..

so pain....is love.... is war.... and youre killing me with kindness.....

im willing to die for " my country" ...so for you... i lay.. lifeless[/quote]

I don't gotta critique....just let these words speak
intel
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Wed Oct 17, 2007 2:18 pm

lol thanks so much spitz! definitely appreciate the love..especially from you man!
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Thu Oct 18, 2007 3:08 pm

...lets hush the mistress word...because they say that sinister curves

symbolize satans degenerate slurs...

if so, why every time we speak the tongue slithers and swerves?

Intel, that was so much food for thot yo'll invited to feast with my brain...

im gon try my best to stop lyin in my... ok im gon think bout that one first.

lets hush the mistress word...because they say that sinister curves

symbolize satans degenerate slurs...

&

he who "makes the bacon"... bestow the smiles:

Remind me of my goldigger collection..

Im shud stop feeding on this poem b4 my brains get obese_Pro
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Sun Oct 21, 2007 8:32 pm

I really dig the romanticized intellect. haha.

Lovely theory/concept... Just proof-read before you post. Other than that, this is hott.

Formalities aside...

Where on earth have you been??[/size]

Gimme a shout :wink:

bless
ugo
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Sun Oct 21, 2007 10:11 pm

[quote name="intel"]i still dont title poems... so heres another one.

i havent decided if

i should finish it or leave it as is.

let me know what you all think

-------------------------------------------------------

pain is love is war, and youre killing me with kindness

he who says a pictures worth a thousand words seems to be the wisest,


ive seen a thousand pictures, of you and i, thousands of kisses...

but only "death " comes to mind followed by drowning whispers.

...lets hush the mistress word...because they say that sinister curves

symbolize satans degenerate slurs...

if so, why every time we speak the tongue slithers and swerves?

is this " his" work?...is "he" reason since swords and spears

monetary status has intergrated with mating seasons to cause avarice and torment peers?

route of all evil is the love for money? or the love of being loved.


is it the meat the lion inside us fights for? or the pride in feeding his cub?

he who "makes the bacon"... bestow the smiles:

though a slave to satan, do he necessarily skoal to vile?

or be just a hopeless child....at which you aim your spears,

i rever god, but you pseudos claim religions because its only based on fear..

i adore the lord... but the thought of dying for love scares me:

to death. i live carefree , till someone launches the "L "word, my heart palpitates; barely...

so pain....is love.... is war.... and youre killing me with kindness.....

im willing to die for " my country" ...so for you... i lay.. lifeless[/quote]

beautiful piece intel,u avnt lost touch.
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Thu Nov 15, 2007 1:44 pm

man i like your style ,been away for such a long time so its really inspiring to have pieces like this welcoming me

keep us readin ......bless
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Sat Dec 15, 2007 9:13 am

who else, but the conceptual Intel.

Ant I been meanin to ask..."is the name a shortened version of intelligence?"

for you my friend, a Liberian freestyle:

here goes...

Intel-legence

eternal-legends

hot-thermal leg's pants

verbal event dance.

surf all cement lakes

verse falls, to rise again no pre-tence

in this hero-graphic past tense.

Immersed in flows in cold thot-halls.

street beats repeat feets, hosted feasts.

sin-'tell-it die'. simple truth no lie.

similar para-normal existences

onefold catapult Babylon.

third eye watchin out for the beast

in this weird turn of events,

grew wings to fly away from the devils mist.

kicked open the kist

gems and jewels fell out

slick golden Thambo twist.

estivation, no estimation

rhyme circulation-optimisation

under God's sun one elevation.
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