Only Love Knows How

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zek
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Wed May 23, 2007 5:05 pm

Only Love Knows How

i dont believe in fate,

coz its a thing i dont rate

i feel so loved in your embrace

as we take on a love race

running to,where noone can trace,

to our only place

where i can only see your face

how can i deny this love so right,

nothing will touch me except your love all night,

as we wake to a day so bright,

i know even when i am torn and blown

when i am with u,only u give me back the crown

as we dance,as if its our last chance

.....................................
unheard voice
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Sun Jun 10, 2007 12:04 am

I just read "head over heals, Its Still Fresh,and Only Love

Knows How
they are very good

but short and hard for me to comment on you are very

good and i hope you continue to

write you are inspiration!!!!
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Sun Jun 10, 2007 1:20 am

this piece, was decent, kinda cliche topic, but "love" will always be a topic in poetry, so i understand the choice, i am not a fan of perminant rhyme schemes, restricts you to use words that rhyme with the previous word, understand, this piece was good, but could of been better,

stay around, read, learn, elevate, thats what we all do.

welcome 2 AHH,

hope you extend your stay, lol

stay inspired,

peace
Ms-Kelly
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Fri Aug 31, 2007 5:37 pm

[quote name="zek"]Only Love Knows How

i dont believe in fate,

coz its a thing i dont rate

i feel so loved in your embrace

as we take on a love race

running to,where noone can trace,

to our only place

where i can only see your face

how can i deny this love so right,

nothing will touch me except your love all night,

as we wake to a day so bright,

i know even when i am torn and blown

when i am with u,only u give me back the crown

as we dance,as if its our last chance



The only thing left to say is

.....................................[/quote]DAMN!!!!! :!:
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Tue Sep 04, 2007 12:19 pm

[quote name="zek"]Only Love Knows How

i dont believe in fate,

coz its a thing i dont rate

i feel so loved in your embrace

as we take on a love race

running to,where noone can trace,

to our only place

where i can only see your face

how can i deny this love so right,

nothing will touch me except your love all night,

as we wake to a day so bright,

i know even when i am torn and blown

when i am with u,only u give me back the crown

as we dance,as if its our last chance

.....................................[/quote]

This forum is getting all lovely...with a lota love poems.

I love this one Zek.

ONE!
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