i resent that you say that!!! cause this is some of the best material iv read in a long time!!! this IS a poem!!! and a great one to say the least!!! all i can say is once ppl read this they gonna be glad your not competing in the poetry battles!!!This is not a poem, but more of a free verse some shit i was thinking and thot i may as well jot it down and see what yall think, in hopes of getting a conversation going on my train of thot!
i want to dissect this piece but cant find a place to start!!! for me it feels like a complex poem but portrayed simplistically!!! kinda hiding the depth!!! which is really hard and takes a lot of skill to do!!! some ppl think that being mad intricate and over complex is the key to an A+ piece but you've found the fine line that rests in the middle!!! let me describe this piece with one line!!! deep in a shallow way!!! :lol: