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nevilbee
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Thu Mar 29, 2007 12:11 pm

kinda reminds me how i keep on falling in love and getting hurt and falling in love and getting hurt and falling in love and getting hurt and falling in love and getting hurt and falling in love and getting and falling back in love again.

great piece nasty chef. keep cooking

MUCH RESPECT
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Sun Apr 01, 2007 1:25 pm

[quote name="nasty chef"]

u didnt even pull me on the sleave and tel me it was time for you to leave

i looked around and you were gone/

and dats when da pain hit me...

[/quote]

that's one heavy piece of line. reminds me of a partner, knowing that heartbreak is just a breath away, but still trying to believe that things can still be good. Such is life. remember, as long as heartbreak don't kill us, it just makes us stronger.
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Mon Apr 02, 2007 11:35 am

that is just beautiful so inspiring
liquid fire
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Mon Apr 02, 2007 3:04 pm

i like the honesty of the piece, so touching.

[quote name="nasty chef"]we were a team/ you made me buy those roses

but you neva told me dat da petals wud one day wilt

and id be left with thorns dat wud make me bleed/

[/quote]

sori, had to also say i felt those lines too.

Nice write,

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