A Swan's Shadow

[S-IMBA]

.........................Dusk

.................... Above the

...............water hang the

...............................loud

.............................flies

...........................Here

.........................O so

.......................grey

.....................then

...................What........................... .....A pale signal will appear

.................When.....................Soon before its shadow fades

...............Where................Here in this pool of opened eye

................In us.............No Upon us As at the very edges

.................of where we take shape in the dark air

...................this object bares its image awakening

.....................ripples of recongnition that will

.......................brush darkness up into light

even after this bird this hour both drift by atop the perfect and instant now

.......................already passing out of sight

.....................toward yet-untroubled reflection

...................this image bears its object dakening

.................into memorial shades Scatterred bits of

................light..............No of water Or something across

...............water................Breaking up No Being regathered

................soon.......................Yet by then a swan will have

..................gone............................ ...Yes out of mind into what

....................vast

........................pale

..........................hush

............................of a

..............................place

................................past

...............sudden dark as

......................if a swan

..........................sang

[Xblaze]

that ish was creative men. one

[Ghostic]

hope you didn't ste*l this ish from somewer...anyways,It's real dope![/size]

ONE

[addict]

[quote name="Xblaze"]that ish was creative men. one[/quote]

word

[DeVious_Wordplay]

I actualy liked the structure... Lotta great poets were creative with structure. Decent piece man!

[S-IMBA]

THANKS PEOPLE,WHORE-STIC DON'T CONFUSE ME WITH YOUR WACK ASSS!!![/size]