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41Trippa
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Sun Oct 08, 2006 10:18 pm

like the last grain of sand through an hourglass

an analogy akin to the last day of my life

fleeting like leaking ions of neon gas

like the firefly's eve i've sparked my last light

brilliantly devoid of power unlike illuminati

i'll be the least of the last to gasp at life's afterparty

and i've contemplated a rugged and varied past

mulled over and juxtaposed it all to critical mass

no solice as it loops like infinity to the power of infinity

falling back on itself persistently in random consistency

defying definition .. things that are obvious seem to mystify

surreal renditions .. minute and bland colors intensify

i scan each horizon for the joke to fit the punchlines

my palm is littered with sticky notes to define my lifeline

ghastly, in a word .. but to reconcile .. effort .. i'll waste none

lastly, not so obscure .. finality .. in death what is done is done

see no more, smile no more, cry no more, weep no more

no more, no more, no more .......... the last sign

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Thu Oct 12, 2006 4:37 pm

Beutiful Metaphorical content to haqndle such a dark topic.....
like the firefly's eve i've sparked my last light
dont know how to explain it....but i really felt this piece.....

Keep postin...
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Fri Oct 13, 2006 1:49 pm

wow son

i will get back to this one we really got some taleneted kids in the house loll
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Sun Oct 22, 2006 8:01 pm

[quote name="41Trippa"]

i scan each horizon for the joke to fit the punchlines

my palm is littered with sticky notes to define my lifeline(.)[/quote]

keep it flowing dude,it flows with fresh water,your scanner reaches this horizon
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