stranger on the net

[kudzie]

i would like to dedicate this one to konko

tired, confused with huddled masses yearning to breathe free

i came to the site ready to curse my hand if it touched the wrong key

with an avalanche of thoughts to my head

i had to wrestle my hands to type each and every word

me ,like a thirteen year old girl not sure of the way she feels

him ,like a sixty year old granny willing to exploit his skills

he picked the exact hurting portion

like he would pick a drop from the ocean

to share i wrote him a letter

and a pharmacist would not have prescribed any better

i felt a war in me that i wasn't part of

he did not pick sides neither did he tell me to back off

he dined with ma fears

and electric pulses is all it took to dry my tears

he is no longer a stranger to me

what we are now is family

[konko]

[quote name="kudzie"]i would like to dedicate this one to konko

tired, confused with huddled masses yearning to breathe free

i came to the site ready to curse my hand if it touched the wrong key

with an avalanche of thoughts to my head

i had to wrestle my hands to type each and every word

me ,like a thirteen year old girl not sure of the way she feels

him ,like a sixty year old granny willing to exploit his skills

he picked the exact hurting portion

like he would pick a drop from the ocean

to share i wrote him a letter

and a pharmacist would not have prescribed any better

i felt a war in me that i wasn't part of

he did not pick sides neither did he tell me to back off

he dined with ma fears

and electric pulses is all it took to dry my tears

he is no longer a stranger to me

what we are now is family[/quote]

whoa!! hock: ... now that one took me by surprise! well, what can i say... thanx men, i'm really flattered :oops:

umm...ahem!...ehm... did u say u was a she???

[Poetic Seraph]

wow!

I had to reread this poem a couple of times, but the more I read it the more I love it

he picked the exact hurting portion

like he would pick a drop from the ocean

that is just beautiful....*speechless*

[Young Fire]

Words like this are the best ways to express feelings. And you portray what you wanna say like a plasma screen t.v.