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kudzie
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Thu Sep 28, 2006 1:23 pm

Guys i'm new at african hiphop so your comments wil be greatly appreciated

my mind i desire to speak

but some thoughts i can't convert to speech

so when i keep talking i switch

to emotion

this empirical world is so rigid we cannot relate

so we turn to what our minds can manipulate

we are the elohim we curse and make hated

we bless and make sacred

some gifted souls had their psychic energies stimulated

from biblical visions to unfathomable philosophies

that enigmatically embrace the earth mysteries

i try connect but it wrestles my mind

coz my thinking is out of phase

so i wander alone in vain through this dark labyrinth

knowledge lies hidden

in the primordial ingredients water rock and sun

without which we conceive none

i dream of monsters,lightning and thunder

a dragon belching poison from its mouth ready to quench my spiritual hunger

i'm searching for the truth

but i'm only reaching as far as the forbidden fruit

thus my essence is paying heavy for this knowledge that i seek

in conclusion forgive me Father for i know not what i speak
illexicon
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Thu Sep 28, 2006 2:14 pm

Peace,

power to the people.

And a piece to pace pass patience is always pertinent to peace.
konko
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Thu Sep 28, 2006 6:25 pm

my mind i desire to speak

but some thoughts i can't convert to speech

so when i keep talking i switch

to emotion
thats real men.... i can relate to that!
i'm searching for the truth

but i'm only reaching as far as the forbidden fruit

thus my essence is paying heavy for this knowledge that i seek

in conclusion forgive me Father for i know not what i speak
am i thinking what ur thinking??... i dunno, but it sounds to me like ur having second thoughts about Gods existence or origin (i may be wrong tho'). well personally i don't believe that any question is forbidden or any knowledge sacred, else it won't even be birthed in our consciousness in the first place. i mean... even if u don't say it out, it's still in ur heart right? and thats just as good as saying it. but i can tell u one thing straiddup men..... God is very real!!! the fact that u are inquisitive about "THE SOURCE" is evidence enuff. heck! even scientists now agree that the world is too complex to have been mere happenstance, but there is every evidence of an intelligent designer and creator.

boy did that poem get me thinking? i like ur flow men... ur style is deep. keep on inking and blessing this forum aight?.... peace! :wink:
antiklokwize
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Mon Oct 16, 2006 12:53 pm

kudzie
let me speak

Guys i'm new at african hiphop so your comments wil be greatly appreciated

my mind i desire to speak...
Iconsiderthatmind-spoken.Welcomeonboard.

peace.[/b]
Nu'Rudeen
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Mon Oct 16, 2006 8:13 pm

Vivid, well constructed and beautiful

welcome to AHH

i'm loving this piece
coz my thinking is out of phase

so i wander alone in vain through this dark labyrinth

knowledge lies hidden

in the primordial ingredients water rock and sun

without which we conceive none
senseless lyricist
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Tue Oct 17, 2006 12:01 pm

We are family!!

Ah jo that was extremely good, u might be new to african hiphop but ur definately not new to the art of poetry!!

Nice One

Extending His Blessing
the big brains
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Tue Oct 17, 2006 1:07 pm

:idea: kudzie: u'v got a really hot idea and xelent lyrix there.

me, am an upcoming rapper over here in Nigeria.i wouldn't mind if

we could meet and put sometin 2geda lyk "THE TRUTH" dat aint gonn b a bad idea u know, mail me bak if u r down: [email protected]
MsGaia
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Wed Oct 18, 2006 5:12 am

Im new to african hip hop as well... was born in S.A, but have been away for years..... just got back... re-discovering the beauty... the magic... and the raw talent!

yours was the first piece of work ive read since ive returned... and i loved it.

Keep shining!
kaydee
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Wed Oct 18, 2006 5:33 am

1st there is SQroot and now U(Kudzie).Great work!
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