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Thu Sep 07, 2006 10:37 am

eish I think me and nevilbee really killed it...scratch our lines... let me continue...



Doesnt make sense... coz people just write the 1st seven word that come into their mind... U should try it again en after every 4 lines put them together so people appreciate the flow of the poem

Worlds and universes revolve around my spine

turn around and show me your milky way

God then rested on the seventh word

then women continued from there until infinity

I HIT THE KEYBOARD BEFORE THOUGHTS DISSAPEAR

and occassionally i choose to travel alone

i'm proud to wear the concious cloud

With radiations of a black rainbow

while

last word stays hidden, unframed by time

a rare love bestowed upon me hate...

exhausted, workload on back like spare tyre

when the madness lies within...return back

i imitate their whispers without hearing them

even walls talk MADIBA's solitary confinement company
mceeQ
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Sun Sep 24, 2006 5:25 pm

words are never enuff to express ME!!
konko
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Mon Sep 25, 2006 12:33 pm

the battle for freedom, has just begun!!!
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Tue Sep 26, 2006 4:22 pm

You'll see Africa deep in ma bonez...

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Sup y'all? not enough said.
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Wed Sep 27, 2006 4:45 pm

i am the truth that lies within...
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Wed Sep 27, 2006 7:06 pm

poetry echos in time challenging shadows to dance
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