a short haiku a poem

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fieldkarma
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Orange Bengal,

Feirce, Faroious, Tiger, perancing,

and crouching, Stalking it's Prey, in

The Long Afternoon Day While The

Antilope,Daydream in The Long Pairie

Straw, Glass,



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As Sea

Rolling White Cap Waves

Crashes Into The Shore Sending White

Cap White Water On To Hot Dry White

Sandy Beach As The Crabs Look For Small

Fish On The Wet Shore As The Tide Roll Back

To Sea



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Wed Jun 07, 2006 12:25 am

yo fieldkarma..i've read somethig 'bout Haiku poems..gat its origin fromJapan or somewhere in asia

i'll come up with sth..
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a star light so bright

yet lights the night

a love so lost

yet lights my life

i love haiku i thought i was da only perso dat knew them most peps into slam poetry and don't take time to listen to some of da ish said in haiku.Plase i beg of you don't let this thread die and post as much stuff as you can.Bye!!!
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i've heard of haiku b4, but i don't know what its all about. can u enlighten me?? :?
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yeah please im also kinda interested!!!! need some info on this!!!

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still waiting on some info!!! mcq??? where u at???

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Mon Jun 12, 2006 10:13 pm

sorry yall its been a minute since i came to da poetry forum,ad i only saw this like right now.Anyway i sincerly apologise,a haiku is like a Japanese poem normally not more than four lines.Its a simple poem with symbolism and metaphors and da ones i've read are normally about everyday things.Da thing dats make me like haiku is its simplicity,innocence ad beauty i'll try to get some poems so i can share with yall soon.
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Mon Jun 12, 2006 10:20 pm

will be waiting eagerly!!! thanks for the info!!! but some other examples would be tite!!!

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