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RedSpot
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Wed Apr 02, 2008 11:30 am

Hi all, am just a newly planted seedling in this poetry garden

Allow me to enter the living rooms of your minds with my thoughts,

My feet are a little muddy from walking through my dreams

But i promise not to drag filth across your headspace..

They call me the RedSpot, from Jupiter I descend
willpress
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Joined: Wed Mar 05, 2008 8:43 pm
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Tue Apr 22, 2008 6:12 pm

Great minds think alike, or so they say

But who say free minds think that way

Willpress here to free great minds

Make you hate me and love me back through them rhymes

Dont tear at my soul coz it aint mine

Tis how Purgatory express itself through time

peace!
soledivawakgalagadi
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Tue May 13, 2008 7:21 am

HI everyone just joined even gave myself a whole new namw for this little adventure... I'm loving the WOrds ... beautiful poetry Africa ... here is a lil bit abt me

i'm a a diva..... in the making that is

born and raised in the dusts of the Kgalagadi

Reared to fear not the midday sun

The heat that rips through the soul of when sun stands

In all her glory and glares at the barren land

speaking begging pleading imploring

asking ears to listen

as she shouts.... I AM The SOle DiVa Wa Kgalagadi!!!

born and raised in the dusts of the Kgalagadi

Reared to fear not the midday sun

She is the sole diva of the Kgalagadi

The soul,sole diva of the Kgalagadi

Shining divalike..... as the bright yellow turns

Into a murky orange and the diva goes out to play

her work is done for today
slightlypoetic
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Joined: Sun May 18, 2008 2:53 am
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Sun May 18, 2008 2:59 am

Who am i?

I am but a woman who has lost her way in life but is finding herself through words

who am i?

I am the only star in the sky brightening up ur lives with syllables of salvation and sacrifice

who am i?

In essence im a lil like you alot like me but nothing like them

who am i?

just a ghost on a board with seekers searching for an identity.

THATS WHO I BE.
Poetic Seraph
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Mon May 19, 2008 8:31 pm

welcome to all the newbees. i been trying to catch up on here and already found some great pieces from the new poets. keep inkin, keep commenting (very important to keep this board alive!!!!) and keep posting
ETERNAL-EYES
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Wed Jun 11, 2008 7:59 am

ETERNAL-EYES HERE...

I'M 18 LIVIN IN THE CITY OF SIN (VEGAS) THAT IS...

KINDA GREW UP ON A BAD PAST SO MY POETRY IS REALLY AN OUTLET.

IT HELPS GET RID OF THE HURT..

I LIKE THIS SITE AND HOPE TO GET POSITIVE FEEDBACK FROM ALL YA'LL...
squid
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Wed Jun 18, 2008 7:10 pm

I am a newbee here and i have read poems from great poets,what we need is for the regulars to read our work ,we need motivation from the regulars. :idea:
Poetic Seraph
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Thu Jun 19, 2008 10:59 am

squid I got u. and thank u for following the rules, I noticed that u have been giving feedback too. I'm gonna get to ur poem right now
occipital
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Thu Jun 19, 2008 9:59 pm

uhm! i joined this forum ages ago, but iM still classified as a newbee. what does it take for me to be an oldee?
Poetic Seraph
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Thu Jun 19, 2008 10:01 pm

activitity! apparently you haven't posted that many messages. the more active you are on the forum, the quicker you'll move to something else than 'newbie'
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