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nowt
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Sun Apr 01, 2007 1:17 pm

hello!! just nu on this forum, hope to get some of my poems critised so i can no if am a good poem writer or not!!
kabSWORD
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Mon Apr 02, 2007 4:29 pm

hello my good people,yeah um nu n i thot it b gr8 2 welcom myslf.
kast1
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Wed Apr 18, 2007 5:52 pm

sup fam, enjoy your stay, make it a long one :D
unheard voice
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Mon Apr 23, 2007 10:06 pm

hey guys.just thought I'd give the definition of me

I live in a world where my thoughts are unimportant

My voice is not heard just because I don't pay the bills

I am labeled as incoherent because of the years I hold

And I'm told that only a women understands the battles that I, myself, have already fight

But when I tell them they do not listen

They do not hear my voice

In all I have conquered more things then you could imagine

But still I am worthless

Not ment to share my thoughts and words

This is why I am a voice unheard
kast1
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Mon Apr 23, 2007 11:01 pm

wowowow!!! those words are to deeep!!!!!!!!!!! i so want to hear more of your voice(poetry)!!!! welcome!!! enjoy your stay!!! hope to read more of you!!!

stay inspired

peace
unheard voice
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Wed May 02, 2007 6:49 pm

:D :D thanx i really look forward to reading everybody else's gifts
AddictiveSoul
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Thu May 10, 2007 5:03 pm

Ummm... yea

Not sure WTF's going on...?

Nonetheless, 'Sup fam *waves*

bless

- A.Soul
KHABZA
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Sat Jun 09, 2007 3:05 pm

EHY SON CHECK

NOW U CALLING ME NEW-BEE/

I START TO WONDER OF AXACTLY WHAT WOULD YALL BE/

I SEE NOW ACTING AS IF U R INNOCENT/

THAT STILL DOESN'T MAKE ANY DIFFERENCE/

YOU CAN'T BUY THIS WITH 50 CENTS/

GET TO LEARN SON U ARE SO INGNORANT/

AFTER THAT U MIGHT PROBABLY MAKE GOOD SENSE/

...KHABZINO ONE ....
Q da Gizzle
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Thu Jun 14, 2007 8:01 am

LONG TIME COMING...

A gazillion times over

I wandered about this corridor;

Time ticking away,

Alien thoughts display-

Configured;

Yet configuring...

Yes my very eyes faced with the fonts

Each time i pass by, i take a look

Not a peep, for it all was there- in my front

But I still could not bring to book

What held me back...

But, now the drums roll out

Running any excuse over...

hands on the knob, foot on the interior floor, lips say heeeeeelllo to u and urs.
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