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PassionatePisces
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Sat Jan 14, 2006 6:11 pm



FY D**k


i got a cool nigga he stay in da hood

he got a fine body and da sex is good

i like it from da front he like it from the back

once i step through da door da lust will attack

i lay him on da bed cuz i like dat freaky shyt

he already know i'm bout to let him hit

i turn on da kelly ya'll know dat shyt is fy

once we got started i thought i was bout to die

he taught me sum of his foreplay i taught him sum of mine

we got super fraky after sippin on red wine

the room was hot and my walls were drippin

i couldnt go out like dat dude r u trippin

i climbed on top cuz i'm a ride or die chick

i'll neva forget dat nite dat was sum fy d**k



AN EBONY LOVE


i'm glad u chose to bless me with your sweet grace

and have me as your ebony queen in lace

i love da feeling of laying in your arms all nite

and caressing your face til dawns early light

and even tho things aren't always so great

i refuse to believe that happiness isn't our fate

cuz when we're together time stands still

but no matter what our love stays real



SOMETHING HE CAN FEEL


some girls have a guy who make them think

that they don't belong in anything less than a mink

it gives people a rush and a sudden thrill

imma give him sumthin he can feel

when your guy does wrong and you know he lied

don't you try to put all that bullshyt aside

you ain't messed up you just want him to be real

and give him sumthin he can feel

he likes to spit that game and make you melt

to forget the way that you felt

when ya'll finish the game and close the deal

you betta give yo nigga sumthin he can feel

you try yo best to keep him in line

and tell yo girlfriends he only mine

be a little unfaithful, you know he will

give him sumthin he can feel

now it's a fact he's been tellin lies

and layin between kim and tanya thighs

you betta pop the trunk and grab that steel

give him sumthin he can feel





SOMETHING REAL

i'm at the point right now i can't explain how i feel

i'm just tired of playin games and i need sumthin real

i've always been the type that was down for my guy

neva jumpin to conclusions askin when where and why?

but it just doesn't seem that love is for me

relationships are hard work and love ain't neva been free

along with true love comes sum heartache and pain

someone who's there thru da sunshine and rain

if u wanna know what i look for

its someone who's true and nothin more

of course your appearance plays a part in the show

but a nice personality makes your whole being glow

i don't ask for much just a fun nice guy

who's down for being real and not living a lie

maybe i've been loved but i just couldn't see

that that someone was there and he was down for me

last but not least...

ODE TO THE LOVERS

this is for the lover in you

that part that likes to screw

and do the things that lovers do

this is for the people who get it on

to all of the old marvin gaye songs

this is for those who toss that nelly

cause when it comes to love makin no one touches r. kelly

this is for the lovers who scream out names

the heat of the moment makes you feel insane

this is for those who have someone to embrace

and loves watching the sunrise light up their face

this is just an ode to the lovers

makin sweet love under red silk covers
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Sat Jan 14, 2006 6:45 pm

haha u crazy...shit's dope

luv tha first piece

n somthin real...
antiklokwize
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Tue Jan 17, 2006 11:10 am

SOMETHING REAL

i'm at the point right now i can't explain how i feel

i'm just tired of playin games and i need sumthin real

i've always been the type that was down for my guy

neva jumpin to conclusions askin when where and why?

but it just doesn't seem that love is for me

relationships are hard work and love ain't neva been free

along with true love comes sum heartache and pain

someone who's there thru da sunshine and rain

if u wanna know what i look for

its someone who's true and nothin more

of course your appearance plays a part in the show

but a nice personality makes your whole being glow

i don't ask for much just a fun nice guy

who's down for being real and not living a lie

maybe i've been loved but i just couldn't see

that that someone was there and he was down for me



this stood out for me, athawize all tha pieces r on point.

keep penning.

peace.
meddal
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Tue Jan 17, 2006 11:43 pm

Great job. similar poems could be blended. I liked something real and love the Ebony Love
and even tho things aren't always so great

i refuse to believe that happiness isn't our fate
keep postin i love reading
PassionatePisces
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Mon Sep 15, 2008 4:57 am

:lol: Well thank you all for commenting on my work... I really need to get back to the pen and pad
Couzifer
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Mon Sep 15, 2008 9:16 am

Great works u' got goin' there, keep mo' comin'.
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