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Fri Jan 13, 2006 1:39 pm

*rockin-swayin n nudgin to yo sublime flow*

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antiklokwize
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Mon Jan 30, 2006 4:56 pm

Peer into my crystal clear eyes of mystery
puts me in a sorta hypnotic state, but I only realise that when I get to...

But when you wake,

You'll have no recollection...

Just great satisfaction

And a euphoric craving for just a fraction

Of what I've given you.
then it awkens me again.

luv tha piece.
BlaqSpid3r
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Tue Jan 31, 2006 7:29 am

I was doin' sum work, then decided to check wat the gr8 poets r up to, but when i read this, i was mesmerized.
My sanctuary seeks to master re-definition...

Re-define stimulation

- The art of inducing you

With merely a stanza's contents and structure...

And making your lips tingle from the soft brush of whispered syllables.

This intereferes with your standard state of mind.

In time, you'll find yourself obediently rocking and swaying

To my sublime flow

- Letting go of your growing curiosity...

Naive to this immense intensity.
Beautiful!!! beauty of this sought has a strange effect on ppl, it awes them, mesmerizes them and even strikes fear into them. I feel a bit of tantalizing and tender arrogance in this piece (if anything like that exists).

pitty u can't vote 4 urself 4 POW, coz that wud be abusin power. LOL. but u trully deserve it.

uqhubeke njalo. (Keep it up!!)
BlaqSpid3r
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Tue Jan 31, 2006 7:33 am

"Soul caressing ... ", thats what the girl next 2 me says.
Beesting
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Tue Jan 31, 2006 12:37 pm

I'm noxious, enchanting, alluring

- these elements bound in one exotic being.
Sister, damn, that's tempting. Its like...wow
I'm schooling minds on thoughts unspoken,

Mending broken souls who's soles ache

- Having run from brain drain and the conservative doom

That could soon consume rich visions

and in their place, conjure blinding sand dunes.
Since u schoolin' us like this, I'ma tell u 2 kontinue. Never stop schoolin, never stop redirecting lost souls, redifining ill defined and mispresented concepts. There's a sayin' that "we need some soul searchin" It difficult for some of us, so, help us clear the mist

Powerful piece SOUL. Never stop skryfin'
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Tue Jan 31, 2006 5:36 pm

[quote name="AddictiveSoul"]I'm noxious, enchanting, alluring

- these elements bound in one exotic being.

Peer into my crystal clear eyes of mystery

Through which i speak and recite

Intertwined dreams and rhythms

That reside in a tranquil prism

- My own nameless 'ism' taking form from within.

I'm schooling minds on thoughts unspoken,

Mending broken souls who's soles ache

- Having run from brain drain and the conservative doom

That could soon consume rich visions

and in their place, conjure blinding sand dunes.

My sanctuary seeks to master re-definition...

Re-define stimulation

- The art of inducing you

With merely a stanza's contents and structure...

And making your lips tingle from the soft brush of whispered syllables.

This intereferes with your standard state of mind.

In time, you'll find yourself obediently rocking and swaying

To my sublime flow

- Letting go of your growing curiosity...

Naive to this immense intensity.

Deliberately, the build up

is...

Slow..

Halting your robust intentions

To feed off my calm energy.

I'm tranquilising your senses

- Breaking the fences you erected

With your phobia of exploring new dimensions.

Now..

I've completed my mission.

What you do with the experience is your decision.

But when you wake,

You'll have no recollection...

Just great satisfaction

And a euphoric craving for just a fraction

Of what I've given you.

I'm noxious, enchanting, alluring

....Addictive...
[/quote]

ahhhhhh, my sista

uval'unyaka ngempela with this one

i loved

like every other one you've wtitten

your imagery

word use-the use of the kings english

i really envy your gift

much, much love

true bless

trusoul
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Sat Feb 04, 2006 12:57 pm

damn....each time i see and read yo art i just melt. i am speechlessly speechless. u are a wordsmith...BIG UP and please dont 4get to give thanx 2 Jah 4 such a blessing.....
D-Law
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Sat Feb 25, 2006 8:01 am

This is amazingly enchanting, had me right in there, never had a feel for poetry like this
quentelon
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Mon Feb 27, 2006 10:08 am

i also just read da piece now delayed i know but i must say sista u blessed

am blown,,,,, the way u constract ur words good God that was quit something...

much love
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