MY FREEDOM DREAM........

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Uncaged Thot
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Mon Oct 31, 2005 1:20 pm

Last night i gave into my sub-conscious.

I felt defeated by this endless dream.

navigated by some overwhelming force

i lost all reasonability and all thought.

guided by some hypnotising voice,

i felt closer to my source, i knew my life had a course.

Into another state of mind i rose.

a state i call devine and unknown.

Light headed, cleansed and renewed i became.....

Feeling free from this world's deadly embrace i exhaled.......

Cold shivers of happy fear danced down my spine

at the sight of this glorious light invading my eyes.

I became physically blind and surrendered to my third eye,

My soul's eye, My immortal eye.

I broke my optical virginity and lived a new reality.

I saw a faceless image, an ageless being,

who is one with end and beginning.

I fell on my knees and covered my face.

tears streamed down my cheeks and my fears felt erased.

a voice thundered, my ears allowed access to these words created in my image.

when asked to make a wish-

i didn't blink, i didn't think.

i lifted my right fist, My BLACK fist and looked to the EAST.

I felt my throat on heat as my mind, my heart, my soul seeked to exit

my skin.

I became one voice as i cried,

I WANT MY PEOPLE TO BE FREE.

Freedom of heart.

I WANT BLACK PEOPLE TO BE FREE.

Freedom of mind and Freedom of thought............UNCAGED THOT! [/b]
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Mon Oct 31, 2005 2:14 pm

Felt that piece, sure got me on a "train on thought" and the journey threatens to be long.
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Mon Oct 31, 2005 2:58 pm

...I'm moved...

props for an innovativ piece...

phew!
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Wed Nov 02, 2005 4:38 pm

Crazy thoughts........

At times i wish my level of imagination was as high as that.

Also, i need to know from all people who read these words:

When you write, do you get lifted to a higher ground, a certain level by smokin weed or meditating or anytin of at sort, or you just get a paper a pen an just scribble??? When is the best times you flow???
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Wed Nov 02, 2005 11:10 pm

I think it jas comes naturally, cant sit down n say "now im writin

a piece". Something got to inspire you or intice you. I sometimes

write when all emotional, jas needin to let it all out but theres

no-one to talk to or to understand, you left with no option but to

turn to paper. Besides paper always listens, never judges and understands to better.

But the then with some people, oh boy, they jas on some

level, can't even figure what they smoke or their sourse o

inspiration, its jas too deep.
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Thu Nov 03, 2005 8:46 am

[quote name="liquid fire"]Crazy thoughts........

At times i wish my level of imagination was as high as that.

Also, i need to know from all people who read these words:

When you write, do you get lifted to a higher ground, a certain level by smokin weed or meditating or anytin of at sort, or you just get a paper a pen an just scribble??? When is the best times you flow???[/quote]

I ain't much of a poet though but I feel for different ppl, it comes from different inspirations. Some are simply gifted, some are inspired (not all inspired ppl know how to put it in writing) while some just write. But it flows better with ppl in tune with themselves, their inner, deeper selves and by extension, their surroundings, both physical and abstract. I hope I ain't getting too complex here. Simply put, to flow like most of the poets we have here, you must have a more than close relationship with yourself. My opinion.
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Thu Nov 03, 2005 11:30 am

I CNT SAY WRITING JST HAPPENS...U NEED TO HAVE SOME KNOWLEDGE ABOUT SOMETHING IN ORDER TO WRITE ABOUT IT. KNOWLEDGE NEEDS TO BE ACCOMPANIED WITH PASSION 4 IT TO BECOME A THOT ON A SHEET. I DNT GET HIGH TO WRITE BUT I MYT DO SO TO INSPIRE SHIT....BUT SHIT HAS TO BE IN YO HEAD ALREADY. WEED CNT MIRACULOUSLY PLANT INFO AND PASSION IN YO HEAD............
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Thu Nov 03, 2005 11:31 am

I CNT SAY WRITING JST HAPPENS...U NEED TO HAVE SOME KNOWLEDGE ABOUT SOMETHING IN ORDER TO WRITE ABOUT IT. KNOWLEDGE NEEDS TO BE ACCOMPANIED WITH PASSION 4 IT TO BECOME A THOT ON A SHEET. I DNT GET HIGH TO WRITE BUT I MYT DO SO TO INSPIRE SHIT....BUT SHIT HAS TO BE IN YO HEAD ALREADY. WEED CNT MIRACULOUSLY PLANT INFO AND PASSION IN YO HEAD............
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