I'M BLACK...WITH DIVINE HAIR

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TeeZeR
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Mon Aug 29, 2005 12:35 pm

As I start to speak

heart-beats pause, waterfalls act like

a gun and a bagde is pointed towards them

and fish shivers

Boldness of my voice shakes hell quarters

Demons are thrown in commotion

and comunication stutters

their anger is manifested violently

like glass that shatters

Yet easily blown away by

wind from wings of angels

Hopping, floating and proclaiming

"This is all cos you're Black, with Divine hair"

Warmth of my words gets' the universe feeling

emotional as i go...

"Don't get emotional on me, you should know

I'm Black, with Divine hair"

Every word is well meditated, it's usage fair

meaning it's from my brain jus below my hair

Sacred culture and spiritual practices

I'm the first born

"I'm Black, with Divine hair"

As I pray the Black hole swallows moon and sunlight

letting this galaxy reach my mental state

The winter swallows energy from light

and blows warm whispering winds like

kisses blown during wet dreams

stars claim teams, constellations

painting hieroglyphic translations to godly sanctions

as angels capture these whispers of echoing breath

"i'm Black..I'm Black, I'm Black"

"YES! I'm Black, with Divine hair"

Ke ja papa le mogodu (Eatin porrige & tripes)

Ke nwela lebekereng (drinkin from a "zinc mug"??)

Ke ja ka letsoho (Using my barehand to eat)

*sighs* "I'm Black, with Divine hair"

Unfaked posture,

big lips on facial exposure

dikgarebe ka di-curve (ladies with curves...African curves :) )

O tlamehile ho rata mofuta ona (You gotta love this kind/type)

Dredlocks and Afros

"I'm Black, with Divine hair"

Well i plan to go bust this on an open mic set this coming Sunday...some honest feedback would do so i can alter...or maybe rewrite the while thing! :lol:
antiklokwize
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Thu Sep 20, 2007 5:59 pm

Memories...

a trip down memory lane.

some of the finest writers I've come across TeeZer. nuff respect.

let's bring back the greatness.

shouting out.

theme Elohim, UnCaged Thot, Addictiv Soul, J4, intel,

Markedos, concrete, rhymetodie now known as YoungTips, Beesting,

...there's so many dope people i met on this passage.

Luv & Fire.

To ALL survivin SoulJahz.

peace.
TeeZeR
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Fri Sep 21, 2007 2:36 am

[quote name="antiklokwize"]Memories...

a trip down memory lane.

some of the finest writers I've come across TeeZer. nuff respect.

let's bring back the greatness.

shouting out.

theme Elohim, UnCaged Thot, Addictiv Soul, J4, intel,

Markedos, concrete, rhymetodie now known as YoungTips, Beesting,

...there's so many dope people i met on this passage.

Luv & Fire.

To ALL survivin SoulJahz.

peace.[/quote]

Ooow mrena...you make me blush! But man on the real...thanx for the compliment...knowing that someone recognizes something you do is really much apreciated. Keeps one going. I remember even when that other piece (Sing Africa) was made the classic of the week i think...i was flattered. Thanks for the recognition bro!

ghetto queen: Kinda caught up with a lot of things, I couldn't have seen this if it wasn't for AfricanSeed's PM!

Shhh..."he thought i'm a sista" [/size]:lol:
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Fri Sep 21, 2007 3:28 pm

Ooow mrena...you make me blush! But man on the real...thanx for the compliment...knowing that someone recognizes something you do is really much apreciated. Keeps one going. I remember even when that other piece (Sing Africa) was made the classic of the week i think...i was flattered. Thanks for the recognition bro!

ghetto queen: Kinda caught up with a lot of things, I couldn't have seen this if it wasn't for AfricanSeed's PM!

Shhh..."he thought i'm a sista" [/size]:lol:[/quote]

hahahaha with the nick name teezer :lol: ???its nice to see u coming in keep writing man.
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Thu Sep 27, 2007 8:13 pm

Teez what it is god...been a while...respek god...i absolutely loved it...should be framed..never sold but framed....a piece of art...sup with u god?
TeeZeR
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Fri Sep 28, 2007 12:32 pm

Oooh the ggggg.gggoddd! Damn it has been some while. All is kinda well with me. Damn you can disappear!

How've you been? Where have you been?
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Fri Sep 28, 2007 1:04 pm

whoa!! sinec when did we get this honor back! whereve you been?!
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Fri Sep 28, 2007 7:17 pm

[quote name="TeeZeR"]Oooh the ggggg.gggoddd! Damn it has been some while. All is kinda well with me. Damn you can disappear!

How've you been? Where have you been?[/quote]

Teez tryin 2 move up the food chain god..u knows..but been gr8 god...got a new born married and life is as it should b.....a bliss and a pleasure..wil try to mail u god.....blessed king blessed later
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