HOLDING HANDS

[theme elohim]

Holding hands

is a gesture of goodwill

which on such a blistering afternoon

cannot appease the sore eye

I would rather were at war

for the mere fascination

of keeping with the infantile tradition

than challenge the world's attention

to a novelty as farcical

as a dungbeetle

intent on wheeling liquid stools

only to drown in them

who could believe we are brothers

we will only succeed

in exciting the fancies

of perverted men.

[trusoul]

[quote name="theme elohim"]Holding hands

is a gesture of goodwill

which on such a blistering afternoon

cannot appease the sore eye

I would rather were at war

for the mere fascination

of keeping with the infantile tradition

than challenge the world's attention

to a novelty as farcical

as a dungbeetle

intent on wheeling liquid stools

only to drown in them

who could believe we are brothers

we will only succeed

in exciting the fancies

of perverted men.[/quote]

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my brother, when i think you can't go any higher you elevate it to even more dizzying heights

beautifully done

much love!!!!!!!!!

trusoul

[theme elohim]

my brother, when i think you can't go any higher you elevate it to even more dizzying heights

I'm relieved you feel thatt way, i was aready thinking I messed it up by forgetting "we" in the following sentence, coz it should read...

I would rather we were at war

Blessings for giving me strength, TRU EMPRESS

[trusoul]

I'm relieved you feel thatt way, i was aready thinking I messed it up by forgetting "we" in the following sentence

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mfowethu, i didn't even notice

i thought it was we're,

you still the man though!!!

much love!!!

trusoul

[xy_monk]

Holding hands

is a gesture of goodwillof keeping with the infantile tradition

than challenge the world's attention

to a novelty as farcical

as a dungbeetle

intent on wheeling liquid stools

only to drown in them

who could believe we are brothers

we will only succeed

in exciting the fancies

of perverted men.

I loved it..

[SHUT_EM_DOWN]

@THEME...

that was beautiful GOD...

respect...

[theme elohim]

thanx y'all, much love. I think we should also make this as interactive as other forums, excet this wont be like the battles but more like giving insights and challenges to each other to enhance our worldview in terms of poetic expression.

trusoul, much love as usual Empress, xy_monk & SHUT_EM_DOWN, much much love