lets expand ths part 2 (AddictiveSoul, Truesoul,etc)

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theme elohim
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Mon Aug 15, 2005 6:21 pm

yini ngawe, rhymetodie, add to this as well...

this rooted depression swallows me whole

like an emotion stilled by tears,

peristalsis suspended

until, with a sudden yet animated violence

it somersaults into my archive

of gut feelings...

yes, it will be felt again

when to cry is protest

than simple despair
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Tue Aug 16, 2005 12:12 pm

[quote name="theme elohim"]

this rooted depression swallows me whole

like an emotion stilled by tears,

peristalsis suspended

until, with a sudden yet animated violence

it somersaults into my archive

of gut feelings...

yes, it will be felt again

when to cry is protest

than simple despair[/quote]

feeding thought patterns with suicidal actions

consulting emotional dictionaries

with missing pages..

panic strikes..

as fear swallows my identity

my organs remain mad at me

as i inhale smoke from dynamite sticks

inside it reforms to blow like suicidal bombers

heart beats chokin my breath as

i remain shocked like front wheels...

hmm...my 1 cent worth :wink:
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Tue Aug 16, 2005 8:22 pm

[quote name="TeeZeR"]
[quote name="theme elohim"]

this rooted depression swallows me whole

like an emotion stilled by tears,

peristalsis suspended

until, with a sudden yet animated violence

it somersaults into my archive

of gut feelings...

yes, it will be felt again

when to cry is protest

than simple despair[/quote]

feeding thought patterns with suicidal actions

consulting emotional dictionaries

with missing pages..

panic strikes..

as fear swallows my identity

my organs remain mad at me

as i inhale smoke from dynamite sticks

inside it reforms to blow like suicidal bombers

heart beats chokin my breath as

i remain shocked like front wheels...

[/quote]

i remain shocked like front wheels

i remain stagnant like closed minds

never knowing the the knowlegde that binds

as my mind reels

i feel it feels

the splitting knowlegde that blinds

and confines the real

real knowlegde of..

ignorance

i am aware that there are things i don't know

but do they know that i know that below

my ignorance glow

i am below you fellow

brother,

though we are of this one

my uneducation me one

much love!!!

trusoul :) :) :)
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Thu Aug 18, 2005 9:29 am

[quote name="AddictiveSoul"]There you are Tru... was getting worried when you wouldn't emerge..

On point piece.

Letz elevate :wink:
[/quote]



MY DEAR. I WAS WORRIED MYSELF, SINCE GETTING BACK TO SCHOOL IVE HIT A BIT OF A BLOCK, SEEMS I GET CURED, THANKS FOR WORRYING.

much love!!

trusoul :) :)
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Sun Aug 21, 2005 11:52 am

my uneducation me one

awaiting lessons that come,

the indiscretion of some

who dress their flesh with the sun

and once the excellence does

unveil her inhibition, exposing her truest soul

I'll say the peepshow's begun

and I'm not even speaking of nudity

quite truthfully who could see

the beauty we constantly overlook

in search of a bullshit dream

while fools believe the views they've seen

are quite distinct, but it's all just a hybrid mix

of blues and green

and not the legitimate shine

of the vividest eye watchin over where we live and we lie

we're all soldiers for god but in Lucifers fight

in this war where we're all just enlisted to die.......

random thought stream....sorry if it don't make no sense.....
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Mon Aug 22, 2005 1:33 pm

1/6* wrote
the indiscretion of some

who dress their flesh with the sun

and once the excellence does

unveil her inhibition, exposing her truest soul

I'll say the peepshow's begun
killa thinking... I am waiting for more of your individual posts coz your thinking is unique god. I would love to thank everyone that was a part of this and urge you to make a copy of our thread because this was one piece of work that is inspiring in terms of bringing minds together to express the depth of the God in all of us. I think time is running out and the more we say what we feel wherever we are, then the more we bring together the fragments of that godly vision for all to understand and appreciate, before the healing process begins. God bless you all infinitely and keep writing...
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