lets expand ths part 2 (AddictiveSoul, Truesoul,etc)

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Wed Aug 10, 2005 1:35 pm

I've been loving your posts and I would love us to do this..add to this

There are birds

whose plummage is like the blue sky

stretching infinitely into one's imagination

until reveries of tomorrow bear a feathery collectedness

even when one daydreams of crows.
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Wed Aug 10, 2005 7:53 pm

There is a mammal

Whose coat is like spotless tufts of white cloud adorning the blue skies

floating infinitely across all's memories

Until regrets of yesterday beget erasure

just as all behold a LAMB.

THE LAMB.

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- yo theme,analyse .

-selah(pause and think about it)
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Fri Aug 12, 2005 8:48 am

I don't know if this is an open thread ( i assumed so...)

The butterfly is not known to speak

but it is known to be

the cause of hurricanes on opposing coasts of the globe you see

this poetry locomotively holds the key the soulful need

to ease the release of a spirit from it's cage of bones and meat

and hopefully, this floating queen can renovate my broken dreams

the winds of change beneath her wings reveals the king I'm s'posed to be.....

won't post too much cause I wasn't invited..

peace
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Fri Aug 12, 2005 10:19 am

[quote name="1/6*"]

The butterfly is not known to speak

but it is known to be

the cause of hurricanes on opposing coasts of the globe you see

this poetry locomotively holds the key the soulful need

to ease the release of a spirit from it's cage of bones and meat

and hopefully, this floating queen can renovate my broken dreams

the winds of change beneath her wings reveals the king I'm s'posed to be.....

[/quote]

I could feel the flow..nice piece! Damn!

ADDICTIVE...qween, you're hardcore!
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Fri Aug 12, 2005 11:58 am

Much love y'all...Qoud wro, I comprehend

Qoud wrote
There is a mammal

Whose coat is like spotless tufts of white cloud adorning the blue skies

floating infinitely across all's memories

Until regrets of yesterday beget erasure

just as all behold a LAMB.

THE LAMB.
much respect

AddictiveSoul wrote
This butterfly’s allure and grace

Were worth the agonizing wait…

The process rate, regarded as mere seconds

Should the enchanting creature stare into you
I am totally overwhelmed by the fluidity of your delivery. Trusoul fist to you, bless your spirit and essence.

1/6* wrote
and hopefully, this floating queen can renovate my broken dreams

the winds of change beneath her wings reveals the king I'm s'posed to be.....
whoa! this thread iss free for your peices anytime. lets do this. Godly blessings for responding. Anyone who can keep up can contribute. Let me add a few more lines...

the winds of change beneath her wings reveal the king I am supposed to be

the horizon my throne, whose shadow soothes chapped lips

blistered by irreconcible dreams

in whose rapture a creature stared into my Becoming's eyes too soon

and missed the glimmer of hope that can no longer flicker,

only remembered when one torches a cigarette
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Fri Aug 12, 2005 3:45 pm

I meant her logo, yo add some more coz u definitely got soul. Take it from where the last sentence leaves it.

Much love
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Mon Aug 15, 2005 12:56 pm

WHOOOOOA!

Thread continues (that was well connected, made it seem almost the same poem, which is exactly what I was driving at. Blessings
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