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thaddaeus
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Tue Jan 24, 2012 3:49 am

diaphanous perch devours the unsteady

such is nature that ungracious host

i lie censored in the garden of exile

sight lost in the filament of a fevered pitch

my skin splinters as my hair draws brittle

teeth crumbling under a fluorescent sky

the flesh gives way to reason, alone

i now abdicate hope, for life plays most unfair
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Wed Feb 15, 2012 11:53 am

the imagery.....is it safe to say your describing the venus fly trap?
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Sat Mar 10, 2012 2:51 pm

Nice piece of art...heavy words well placed!
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