Jewel Hunt

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pro-dominant
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Sun Jul 03, 2011 9:23 pm

she was raised by divorce parents…. it seemed like a forced marriage

judged by the screaming of a hoarse larynx

the arguments ..confusion, where harboring abuses

from a father who never bothered to acknowledge his new kid

the truth is,

she never seeks attention….

couldn't prevail in math, always failing class or received detentions

to beat depressions in lessons, she'd reek of weed and cigarette ends

thinking whys her life always feeling like it needs direction

but no blessings for Jewel Hunts..see,

she was a school flunky known in hoods as the loose junky

who gave head to any fool in public stools that produced money

too cunning, her pimp fueled the hungry beast at the end of the pipe

arms injected with white till she rests her eyes

hoping for a dope over dosing that'll end her life

she just wants to be free……….
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Mon Nov 21, 2011 11:09 pm

Im glad u enjoyed it and i greatly appreciate ur comment. ill be sure to give a look at ur work.

peace...be easy and keep safe
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Tue Jan 24, 2012 3:54 am

i forgot how inspiring this place is. nice, pro-dominant.
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Sat Mar 10, 2012 3:14 pm

Man am loving this piece, its jus so real...this kind o' stuff is happenin' for real in our society, it aint fiction n' I love the fact that you managed to capture the right picture.

Great ink.
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Fri Mar 16, 2012 12:21 pm

Thanks Fam..im looking forward to some of ur new scribes. Dont keep us waiting.

Peace
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Fri Mar 16, 2012 9:41 pm

Dude, this piece is awesome. it flows smoothly. not so much abstract, the imagery put it to motion.
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Sun Mar 18, 2012 1:27 pm

Thanks bruh...dont leave us thirsty i hope 2 be reading something of urs soon.

peace
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Mon May 28, 2012 11:49 pm

who couldnt prevail in maths....? lol damn, is this a distant friend somewhere. Krash Korse
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