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thaddaeus
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Mon Mar 28, 2011 12:45 am

Shift in perspective

Delineated reason

Illusion of time

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Meditated calm

Talisman of the Godhead

Fabricated angst

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Methodical lore

Levelheaded communion

Harmonious pact

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Invisible hand

The presence of only one

I am eternal

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Obtuse medium

Underhand exhibition

Acclimated ruse
Siza
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Fri Apr 01, 2011 10:45 am

Damn... Wats happenin 2 AHH, where is couz n seraph. I mean this forum use 2 b so hot that hell looks lyk the iceland. How we gon let a piece lyk this go without commenting. Thaddeus am luvin the imagery. Rilly nice piece.
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Damn... Wats happenin 2 AHH, where is couz n seraph. I mean this forum use 2 b so hot that hell looks lyk the iceland. How we gon let a piece lyk this go without commenting. Thaddeus am luvin the imagery. Rilly nice piece.
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Sat Apr 09, 2011 1:15 pm

interesting take on religion and how our chosen "mediums" and pastors guide us in all sorts of directions such that it gets confusing who is who and what is what.

scattering flock in all directions,

tools being emotional erections

blinding sight so we don't question

where is God?

I wish i could make half much sense as you do using two words and three lines.

Honour

Pfungwa Kizito

ps: are the three line stanza a reflection of the trinity or of the three main religions?
thaddaeus
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ps: are the three line stanza a reflection of the trinity or of the three main religions?
It changes every day, so your guess is as good as mine.
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Thu Apr 14, 2011 4:07 pm

i thought the threes where an interesting dynamic to your piece!

With the hope that we can get some activity back on the site.. please comment on at least two other pieces.

Blessings

Pfungwa
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This might help. www.near-death.com

English language is so abstract. Though this poetry might appear witty, but I think the abstract words are its impediment. Not enough imagery which I think is what makes poetry interesting. By the way, Before you jump into conclusion, you might want to let your inner self find the truth instead of allowing your ego do what It knows best.
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