2010

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GodSon
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Sun Jan 02, 2011 2:53 pm

"Weeping may endure for a night"

But this night has no end in sight

They say: "Joy cometh in the morning"

But this year's brought nothing but mourning

Linda died from an overdose

We will never know why, I suppose

Jim followed her later this year

He fell victim to vodka and beer

Thomas finally broke free from his chains

With a shotgun he blew out his brains

Verner lost to the cancer at last

His brother did him less than a week outlast

The Bible reads:

"The Lord is my light and my salvation;

Whom shall I fear?"

I will tell you without hesitation

I fear next year
Kizito
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Tue Jan 04, 2011 11:58 am

hmm.. i like how you put it out there simply..

your almost tess sentences add to the somberness of the piece.

and lastly there is an air of indifference... your fear 2011.. so much you cant run from it.

a, so what.. its going to come anyway.

nice..

i like..

Honour

K
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