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goldenballs
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Sun Sep 13, 2009 12:10 pm

provocative proactive pro everything

i was lost in a sea of nothingness with just

a thought of living life as just a normal being

sadness incorporated is my legal entity

my current mood belies the truth as im

trying to keep my dignity

like a child i fall and cry

and feel my life isn't worth anythin

now im sitting here pride-less and just waiting to die
eizzy.k
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Thu Sep 17, 2009 7:17 pm

sadness incorporated is my legal entity

my current mood belies the truth
i know its random but do you find you write your best when your depressed? or pissed off or emotional...???

Funny that most poets find that they do...its like we're drawn to sadness and dark things, not for the feeling but for the artistic out come...know what i mean??

wonder what was going on when you wrote this...
goldenballs
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Thu Sep 17, 2009 8:16 pm

i concur with ur statement its like sadness draws us to it! I was/am dealing with an issue that just doesn't wanna go away the more i try to resolve it the more complicated it gets!!

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Thu Sep 17, 2009 8:29 pm

Helplessness!...is wut I feel, this piece is jus' too helpless it makes me feel HELPLESS[quote name="goldenballs"]like a child i fall and cry

and feel my life isn't worth anythin

now im sitting here pride-less and just waiting to die[/quote]Thats wut I mean!
eizzy.k
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Thu Sep 17, 2009 9:35 pm

[quote name="goldenballs"]i concur with ur statement its like sadness draws us to it! I was/am dealing with an issue that just doesn't wanna go away the more i try to resolve it the more complicated it gets!!

gilded1[/quote]

yeah, you said it better...sadness draws us to it...always wondered why though?

Gud luck with what you going through...maybe you should stop trying to fix it and let it be, if all that your doing is making it worse...
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Mon Sep 28, 2009 1:19 am

helplessness is also the feeling I get out of this. it's a short piece, but it is overflowing with emotions.

try to put ur mind on sumthing else for just a lil bit and a solution will find it's way to you
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