Cracks in the wall

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mimic truce
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Mon Aug 17, 2009 3:13 pm

Its cracks in the walls

But I understand now… its only way to see you anymore

Head lowered in a “twist” of dread

Could be a disguise for my flaws…

My body has its scars

But I see now

You can’t look “forword” to not seeing head on

How to be, where to go?

Is this me? is that the world?

Or is this them? And that’s the goal?

But how to know …except in the cracks in the wall
nevilbee
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Fri Aug 28, 2009 1:40 pm

are these good or bad memories that these cracks bring to you?
mimic truce
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Tue Sep 08, 2009 3:40 pm

just trying to proove a point. this rap shit is debatable.
brooks
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Sat Sep 12, 2009 8:13 pm

i c u mimic!

piece is a lil confusin though
eizzy.k
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Thu Sep 17, 2009 7:03 pm

[quote name="brooks"]

piece is a lil confusin though[/quote]

yeah, but feels like on the edge of something profound...break it down 4 us...
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Mon Sep 28, 2009 12:58 am

I think it's kinda confusing too. But I agree with Eizzy so if mimic is still around, I'd love a break down too
mimic truce
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Thu Oct 22, 2009 5:19 pm

ussually i write a whole verse like this.

i got into poetry cos i can do under 16 bars.

cracks in the wall - its a private thought. writing it here (this thread) symbolizes a visual in the wall (u looking in or a person looking out) into or out to the next room. and watching another getting a beating or something. cant help the person, but you understand how it feels...n in your mind the last thing is whether to help or not to???? now or later??? n thats how the piece ends.or hangs unfinished....
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