unspoken words..............


b boy
Joined:Sun Apr 26, 2009 2:14 pm

Sun May 24, 2009 11:13 am

as we live

in d light of recent events

we died

in the darkness of past experiences

impurities of my sins

coverse with

the chastity of your hypocrisy

unlike freedom

love is an unspoken sound

expanding the heart's kicks

while retracting mental blows

the silence of your feelings

produce deep emotional screams

and as my heart bleeds tears

my eyes cry blood

as dark thoughts live in my past

in d dimm light of pre post present events

remenising upon the future

as the past preys upon my present

i become mentally conscious

the war of love cant be won

it can only be fought......................
Poetic Seraph
Posting Freak
Joined:Thu Jul 27, 2006 2:05 pm

Sun May 24, 2009 12:25 pm

woooooow! this piece is sooo sad, yet so true. it's a war that can't be won, but we still pick up our arms and enter the battle. i love the worldplay in every line!! love it love it loooove it
Senior Member
Joined:Wed Mar 29, 2006 10:29 am

Mon May 25, 2009 2:45 pm

An age old war indeed... but why do we have to fight? I just wanna surrender and let it take me in... FOREVER!!!... Great piece man... beautiful
Posting Freak
Joined:Thu Jul 26, 2007 1:54 pm

Wed May 27, 2009 7:18 pm

[quote name="Nameless"]... but why do we have to fight? I just wanna surrender and let it take me in... FOREVER!!!...[/quote] :lol:

Love is the most complex topic I've ever come across...that's why I rarely touch on it...but u' gave it a nice shot!

No matter how many answers u' get abt love...still the ?Question remains?
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