poetry means...................

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b boy
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Thu May 21, 2009 8:39 am

a mental experiment

of psychological grudges

and spiritual copulation................



an unknown rhtym

of familiar tunes

echos of lost voices.....................

a bright light

bleak in its unique existence.................

a lost throne

in the annals of hell

to be rescued by thiefs.....................

a lost mind

that finds thoughts

unexpressable in 26 alphabets...........................

a perfect illusion

undifferentiable from reality

yet fictitious in its true essence......................

an uncounscious death

unrealising of its becomings

yet alive in its dreams....................

a gasp for last breath

short, fast and little

yet most satisfying..................

a brutal decapitation after death

happy in realisation

but unaware of its situation................

a fracture in the timelessness of our universe

to be tapped upon by infidels

and missused by thugs.................

a power for gods

to be lost in the hands of mere men

for an eternity of anguish...................

this is what poetry means to me.........................
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Thu May 21, 2009 2:13 pm

[quote name="b boy"]a lost mind

that finds thoughts

unexpressable in 26 alphabets...........................[/quote]

thats the line that describes me. true.b-boy your description is overwelming. one
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a lost mind

that finds thoughts

unexpressable in 26 alphabets
and
a gasp for last breath

short, fast and little

yet most satisfying..................
wow! am feeling the whole definition, u really defined it from all it's aspects and views, but those 2 stanzas feel very personal to me. keep inkin, it's clear that poetry is in your genes!!
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WOW!

What I would have quoted was quoted by Couzifer and Seraph...they also said what I would have said.

This article is as beautiful as a work of art. Nicely and intelligently crafted!

ONE love!
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[quote name="Ghostic"]What I would have quoted was quoted by Couzifer and Seraph...[/quote]Uh?!...I jus' stepped in dawg!...how u' kno' wat I be quotin'?! :) ...neva mind...I guess u mistakin cornelius wit' teh couz!

b boy...u' r' good at poetry man...seems it means really alot to u'...I guess it does to any other poet.

Poetry means life...the word that lived before existence...the spoken words by God invokin' creation!
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Fri Aug 14, 2009 9:57 pm

i thought you would halt wit time..

your captivating concept

made me back in this hihop world

not for fun only but try to find out what kind of fire burns in it.

and the smoke that you head produces inform of poetic words are just unbelievable
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[quote name="b boy"]a mental experiment

of psychological grudges

and spiritual copulation................



an unknown rhtym

of familiar tunes

echos of lost voices.....................

.thats me, me me me!

dope piece sire! yu really and trully described poetry!
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Sun Aug 16, 2009 10:43 pm

Dat was coooool.keep doin your thing men
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Mon Aug 17, 2009 5:44 am

[quote name="b boy"]a lost mind

that finds thoughts

unexpressable in 26 alphabets..........................[/quote]

wow.....this part right here jumped off the page at me.......thats how it really is

i enjoyed this piece very much......ur style is drastically different than mine.......but nonetheless is definitely a nice piece



dope drop..... :twisted:
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