Seen by the Unseen... A visual piece


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Joined:Wed Mar 29, 2006 10:29 am

Thu May 07, 2009 2:54 pm

I blinked to find myself rested on intertwined shadows,

perfectly aligned to form an ellipsis.

Soothing melodies of sound passionately kissed my eardrum

as the wind whispered joyful tidings of days to come.

The chill of time dissolving into a stand-still,

tickled my skin as dust particles from our faces blended onto the stillness of night.

The distant grip of my eyesight formed a perfect continous half circle with the skies above.

And soon stars fell,

TWO to be exact.

From behind the shadows,

a picture drew itself onto the canvas.

Dreams and reality blended as the hour glass broke.

The skies melted,

and before me,

stood a masterpiece.

A being that escaped the timeless portal of a land seen by the unseen.

A dimension beyond human perception.

I felt myself drift

as her gaze sucked me into a world that rested between her eyeballs and her distant thoughts of the forgotten.

The waves of her sweet laughter carried me as I drifted afloat the ripples created by her lips.

This world was unknown to my senses,

but i let the magic of this being take me away.

And I melted onto a dimension unknown to my comprehension.

At first I thought It was a dream,

so i pinched myself so hard I bled.

I closed my eyes to find them open on the other side.

With every blink,

my world re-arranged

as all the components re-aligned themselves to please my taste.

So I quickly shut my eyes from the other side

to find them open on this side.

Then she smiled,

My lateral view converged to centralize the picture.

As quickly as the picture kept re-drawing itself,

re-painting its existence on the canvas of night.

My eyes blinked,

and for a moment I thought I heard a "shutter".... A click

My brain framed the moment.

When detail met pure artistry,

the richness of colour,

where each stroke is independently connected to the next.

The disintegration of the integrated intertwined.

And for that moment...

I felt Perfection.
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Joined:Thu Jul 26, 2007 1:54 pm

Thu May 07, 2009 11:38 pm

Nameless, jus' keep paintin' man, keep paintin these poetic walls...Poweful piece...wat else can I say!
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Mon May 11, 2009 3:34 pm

this is hot. put a 'lol' on my mind.

the idea of inner eyes and outer eyes was plain murder. An image so real you see with your outer and inner eyes. I loved this man. keep inking.

i love the imagery. this gal is celestial in reality. (both eyes. the surface and the poetic see it so! :D )

What's the two stars, though? her eyes?
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Joined:Wed Mar 29, 2006 10:29 am

Thu May 14, 2009 12:29 pm

Cornelius, what do you mean by "striking".... Thanks Couz, thanks V norm.... And yeah, the two stars are her eyes.... her eyes are angelic.... She is special... Galactic indeed... i've written so many pieces for her, but i don't wanna flood you guys with love poems. he he he
Joined:Thu Aug 09, 2007 4:21 pm

Sun May 17, 2009 6:41 pm

"I closed my eyes to find them open on the other side", the abstract then becomes the reality - good piece
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Mon May 18, 2009 2:52 pm

I give great thanks to ya'll people for keeping me inspired,... Occipital, thank you man.
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Tue May 19, 2009 2:07 pm

i ment the poem is touching, warm to the emotions ,smooth to the mind ,and sweet for the thoughts.word
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Joined:Sat Dec 01, 2007 1:37 pm

Tue May 19, 2009 4:47 pm

what a read! wow nameless, the chick must be something else. nice very nice

by the way. did she read this piece n if she did, wat was her obvious reaction? :D
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Tue May 19, 2009 11:43 pm

Books, I read it for her... She loved it. I'm so blessed cos she's also into the whole hip hop and poetry thing. so she andastands me :)
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