"Sugar Coated"

[Couzifer]

Thank you eizzy-k for breaking it down,its like u' read my mind while i was writing this; like I said earlier, its good engulfed in evil and vice versa and u've jus' explained it all above.

Respect.

[eizzy.k]

no, thank U!

It was a pleasure breakin it down,



I love poetry like dis...wen not everything is stated inna obvious way.

Propz once again...

[AddictiveSoul]

oooh wowzee...

hectic hectic hectic...

*can't comment, but has a brainwave*

Tish, you ever watched "dusk 'till dawn"?...

It's a (gruesome and more literal) parallel to this piece.

[Couzifer]

Thanks AddictiveSoul for u feedback;

Tish, you ever watched "dusk 'till dawn"?...

It's a (gruesome and more literal) parallel to this piece.

mmmmhn, funny enuff coz I've never watched it myself, so this must be coincidence ?!

[tish]

Now i have to watch the movie and understand it from a poet point of view.thanks