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Couzifer
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Mon Mar 03, 2008 5:43 pm

Sup people, another piece from me, feel free to say what you think about it.

Peace.

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I looked beyond my sight

and saw her great beauty

I listened beyond my hearing

and heard her sweetest words

I smelled beyond my smelling

and smelled her incense scent

I touched beyond my feelings

and felt her smoothest skin

I loved beyond my heart

and felt her deepest love
XCAPEE
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Mon Mar 03, 2008 10:59 pm

ha ha..pretty short piece tho

keep up
Enigma
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Tue Mar 04, 2008 3:58 am

I learnt beyond my wisdom

and the more I understood

Lovely and short.
Couzifer
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Tue Mar 04, 2008 6:52 am

[quote name="Enigma"]I learnt beyond my wisdom

and the more I understood

Lovely and short.[/quote]

Thanks Enigma

Dear poets, lets keep this going.
Couzifer
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Tue Mar 04, 2008 6:56 am

I waited beyond my patience

and the more it paid
Couzifer
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Tue Mar 04, 2008 10:21 am

I fought beyond battles

and the more I conquered
Couzifer
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Tue Mar 04, 2008 1:39 pm

I ran beyond speed

and the further I reached
Mdaave
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Sat Mar 08, 2008 10:08 pm

Sound waves of hip hop heard through satelites from the galaxies and beyond.
Xblaze
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Mon Mar 10, 2008 1:22 am

i persevered beyond my limitations

and the more i gained...

nice couz..
Mdaave
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Mon Mar 10, 2008 2:27 pm

I played beyond my injuries, the more I scored ...
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