What's good y'all?....i'm new in this joint, repping Tanzania,check it.......
My work ethic towards lyrics is tireless/
i get my creative inspiration from the celestial wireless/
somebody tell my band to play violins and pour some 18th century wine for your divine lyrical highness/
life is like a sitcom and everyday i'm writing an orginal pilot/
my provacative topics will dropkick your obnoxious nonsense/
J-Dogg is God's vessel of knowledge,one of the last remaining prophets/
a rap artist rocking dark garments drawn to this gothic hiphop metropolis/
i get deep in lessons like a five percenter/
this rhyme is meant to connect past and present events like a space-time bender/
my poetic intelligence affords me membership into the society of Mensa!/
i am simply the best--so there's no relevance in an attempt to battle/
if you can't sense my eloquence then your perception of depth is shallow/
Poet Laureates break their necks trying to comprehend the perfect sentences i invent in my parables/
you're not an emcee--you're an amateur with a character defect/
the average rapper would have to practice six calendars to match my standard of excellence/
at best you're a poor man's Nelly,so there ain't shit you bastards can tell me/
i have been dope ever since i was an embryo in Mother Africa's belly/
it doesn't matter if you're shining son(sun), you could always get eclipsed/
cause when it comes to rhyming Jay stays grinding like The Clipse/
i hold the microphone like a grudge,and with every rhyme it gets worse/
which explains why i apply war paint on my face every time i write a verse/
today's rap game is in a stalemate/
it is standing in the same place like a schizophrenic patient in a catatonic state/
in a past life J-Dogg played spades with the gods and gambled away the planet's fate/
i'm trying to pull my destiny closer and resist karma's push/
by the way,who do you think is the triple six--is it Osama or Bush??!!......
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dope verse god, I think u r gonna burn enough MCs....tightI have been dope ever since i was an embryo in Mother Africa's belly/
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appreciate the feedback.....one.
this ish be killing 'em mayn
nice piece
nice piece
nice piece dawg but you rather keep yer head up for battles cus cats here aint ta smile...
welcome and stay active
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welcome and stay active
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Nice piece dawg,but like xcape said"but you rather keep yer head up for battles cus cats here aint ta smile..."..wat u say we have a lil'duel,one on one,Iv been outta battle in a while so wat ya think....if its all good holla back bro lets get it on...
one....and hey its all love....
one....and hey its all love....
@A-Gon.....what's up dawg?....aiight yea,let's do this.....you wanna set it up?....holla
Yo jay,its all right with me...We dont really neead any rules do we?The only rule we have to keep in mind is "its all luv"If it aight with ya ,take the irst shot,am pretty low spirited today....
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