Victor d Rattler (viktarattle) actually copied n pasted (Check out his first battle verse) --- damn. Nigga u wacker dan gitrash. u can run ya mouf in response ta wat I said, it don't matta kid, tis d last u b hearin from moi... U R FUCKED!
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[quote name="COG"]Victor d Rattler (viktarattle) actually copied n pasted (Check out his first battle verse) --- damn. Nigga u wacker dan gitrash. u can run ya mouf in response ta wat I said, it don't matta kid, tis d last u b hearin from moi... U R FUCKED!
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bitch(a.k.a cog)you don't even know shit about me/
I bring it straight to your chest, ask your mother about me
I'm just a little bit dodgy,/,, plus a whole lot smarter
I might advise ya, or I might pulverize ya
I can visit any city, get respect in the street
While you alone in your room, shook to death of the streets
I'll take a second to speak, I keep my weapon in reach/
better watch what ya say or u migth get hurt
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bitch(a.k.a cog)you don't even know shit about me/
I bring it straight to your chest, ask your mother about me
I'm just a little bit dodgy,/,, plus a whole lot smarter
I might advise ya, or I might pulverize ya
I can visit any city, get respect in the street
While you alone in your room, shook to death of the streets
I'll take a second to speak, I keep my weapon in reach/
better watch what ya say or u migth get hurt
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i never try to waste my slines on some fuckin' faggots/
still i wont try to hurt u ..but try to run u /
u leave me no choice but to hurt ur feelings/...i can turn your sights
kill until sub-zero /...all my gawe It´s the end of your
Take your last one now/..u still need not beg for induction ,/cos i've taken u down the surg. not 4 operation but 4 lyrical liposuction.
still i wont try to hurt u ..but try to run u /
u leave me no choice but to hurt ur feelings/...i can turn your sights
kill until sub-zero /...all my gawe It´s the end of your
Take your last one now/..u still need not beg for induction ,/cos i've taken u down the surg. not 4 operation but 4 lyrical liposuction.
[quote name="viktarrattle"]Nigga deep in the rhythm/ experience speak
Some keepin' the wisdom, / i'm dope the streets is my inspiration
Revolutionary blunted / I hit it from the back
Under the cherry moon,/I hold notes and carry tunes
My guise pack heat enough to bury June,/i aint finish with u so soon/
this is fumes of a real nigga seep into your room
Or through ur mamas boom/ son so many cats,they call me high noon
Offerings to Osun hoping this war never end so soon
My blood I expose on the floors, tell them the game aint only the score
Hold on to your life as I carry these styles../ ur line is weak as a sleak bruv u aint supposed to rhyme, better off with a clothing line
i'm so shine like the the son picture ...u holding the blinds
Mixing golden seal and wine, holding just a nine to survive this vicious attack from the rattler :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:[/quote]
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Some keepin' the wisdom, / i'm dope the streets is my inspiration
Revolutionary blunted / I hit it from the back
Under the cherry moon,/I hold notes and carry tunes
My guise pack heat enough to bury June,/i aint finish with u so soon/
this is fumes of a real nigga seep into your room
Or through ur mamas boom/ son so many cats,they call me high noon
Offerings to Osun hoping this war never end so soon
My blood I expose on the floors, tell them the game aint only the score
Hold on to your life as I carry these styles../ ur line is weak as a sleak bruv u aint supposed to rhyme, better off with a clothing line
i'm so shine like the the son picture ...u holding the blinds
Mixing golden seal and wine, holding just a nine to survive this vicious attack from the rattler :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:[/quote]
These lines look familiar .[/size] :oops: :oops:
men, u kno u got wack lines/
when a freestyle knocks ur pre written rhymes/
u no match lyric wise/ boy, my flow's nice/
but u dont know, cos u aint got game,and only game can recognise/
i done wit u....4 1/2 bars are enuff for the wise!
when a freestyle knocks ur pre written rhymes/
u no match lyric wise/ boy, my flow's nice/
but u dont know, cos u aint got game,and only game can recognise/
i done wit u....4 1/2 bars are enuff for the wise!
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Neva try to quit / as i'm abt to flow with my sneeze
Im the original /cos im a lyrical Gee
U no u dont wanna test me/....cause u can never see me
i wont do a thing if you pay the fee/.
when i get drawn im gonna buzz like a bee
gwarn u a ZERO with a big lightning/
it was a eight point six so it might been a dream
what, my gun's dirty time for a clean/
and i keep the limit at about sixteen cos u re a wack MC.
Im the original /cos im a lyrical Gee
U no u dont wanna test me/....cause u can never see me
i wont do a thing if you pay the fee/.
when i get drawn im gonna buzz like a bee
gwarn u a ZERO with a big lightning/
it was a eight point six so it might been a dream
what, my gun's dirty time for a clean/
and i keep the limit at about sixteen cos u re a wack MC.
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NIGGA PLEASE!!!!!!! :!: :!:
ZERO.......Get ur head straigth and stop fronting with some Hausa folktale moon ligth story line ryhme u're delievering ...i want to see what u've got nigga ..cos all i'm seeing at the moment is like an explanation of an eye account at a crime scene...... :oops: :oops:
ZERO.......Get ur head straigth and stop fronting with some Hausa folktale moon ligth story line ryhme u're delievering ...i want to see what u've got nigga ..cos all i'm seeing at the moment is like an explanation of an eye account at a crime scene...... :oops: :oops:
u can spit all u want...when u done get ppl to vote...i aint wastin any more time on ur weak ass copy & paste rhymes...soundin like a deranged juvenile deliquent...and dude get off my nuts...stay out of my threads if u aint objective!
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shot u so quick i gave u the stunner/...thought i couldn't get down/
thought i was a gonna/...thought i was lost that i wouldn't see ur wack skills/..but that was then when i unleashed the borough
i run right quick with the real old g's/i made u look like a mess, /wrote alot of killer ryhmes..but u decide to write stories/but now i make hits with the will and the breeze/and i still rattle in the manor.As i eat through your u like a moth and i carry on biting your flesh as its soft/..cos i spray like a sauner, just like the lurer gimme one, in my back better crawl up
cause you'll fall off choose it/cos u loose grip, /when i spit that venomous shit from the lip /it gets hectic when i turn the mic septic
make your body jet like a epileptic /never try me again cos ve got th mics(10 in all)...better u slag of nigga ,back off nigga ..never return a cook beefs u cant handle............HeeeeeHaaaaaaaaaaaa
thought i was a gonna/...thought i was lost that i wouldn't see ur wack skills/..but that was then when i unleashed the borough
i run right quick with the real old g's/i made u look like a mess, /wrote alot of killer ryhmes..but u decide to write stories/but now i make hits with the will and the breeze/and i still rattle in the manor.As i eat through your u like a moth and i carry on biting your flesh as its soft/..cos i spray like a sauner, just like the lurer gimme one, in my back better crawl up
cause you'll fall off choose it/cos u loose grip, /when i spit that venomous shit from the lip /it gets hectic when i turn the mic septic
make your body jet like a epileptic /never try me again cos ve got th mics(10 in all)...better u slag of nigga ,back off nigga ..never return a cook beefs u cant handle............HeeeeeHaaaaaaaaaaaa
WOW.....so much pain between ya two
but you cats have some potiental their......
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FLOW..........zero
WORDPLAYS......" DA UTTHER GUY "
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nice job fellas

but you cats have some potiental their......
PUNCHLINES.....zero
FLOW..........zero
WORDPLAYS......" DA UTTHER GUY "
simplicity......zero
winner....zero

nice job fellas
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