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Paracital-Methods
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Mon Nov 08, 2004 6:21 pm

In the wake of the global tragedy ( Bush’s re-election) i found it of a grave necessity to adress the issue, these are ultimately my views and opinions, and are by no meens intended to tell anybody how to think or act, nevertheless i seek to make it clear that this post is not a platform for cats to spit fabricated “gangsta” fantacies and mediocre self-glorification poorly constructed rhymes,(in my earliar days of confusion ive known courted and mingled with the realest of criminals, and believe me when i tell you that they do not sit behing keyboards and whrite rhymes on the internet, so face it !!) nor is this a post for some pseudo intellectual concious crap (from headz who never spent a day of their fuckin lives doing any type of welfare service in their community)

Its merely just poetic theorem, a lyrical missile aimed directly at the powers that be from another workin class activist ..........!!!

So buss it..............................



Yo im at the front lines of poverty like the peasants in Haiti/

The only property i own is pitch-fork and matchetti/

Had a dream that i rebelled and beheaded my master/

Forced his wife and kids to watch it! then i murdered them after/

woke up and found myself still trapped in a shelter/

So intead i wrote a verses that cause calactalismic disaster/

Cuz i saw the irony in peace keepers building atomics/

And slave masters fighting for freedom is oxymoronic/

Or how the Central Intelligence Agency smuggles narcotics/

And why does the media outfits keep on avoiding the topic/

But like the candle i steady keep the fire on wax /

Harder to handle than ten shots of vodka on rocks/

The fate of the working class is dictated in paraghraphs/

We are systematically suspended in a fucking paradox/

Forced labour like we in the coal mines of leningrad/

With past tales that often started good and ended bad/

So this is for the children of Ghaza subjected to hunger/

Practically cheated exploited and buried deep under/

I scripted this specifically to put the governments in danger/

Cuz i studied their doctrines, dechiphered their secret agendas/

And Bush i’d be pissed too if i had ya family members/

One of your daughters is a slut , the other a raraging alcholic/

And the global conquest you started isnt making no profit/

Your boyfriend Dick Cheney said your dick is as thin as a pencil/

And there’s a rumour going arround that u couldnt handle utencils/

The demise you’ve caused is unparralel in US history/

Is like aparthied where 10 percent decide the detiny/

Or how the congress clearly supresses leathal evidence/

And the military focus on drafting inner city residents/

Im going AWOL , so Rumsfeld fuck your regiments!/

I’d rather mobalize the masses and impeech the president!/ ..............

The above verse is an intellectual property of Paracital-methods its unlawful to use any part of its context, under protection of ASCAP copyright codes,as well as my personal artistic integrity
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Tue Nov 09, 2004 4:39 am

Yo my bad guys !! i just went over the whole shyt again and noticed a few typos, i wrote the verse super fast and didnt have the time to spell check (as a writer i know how frustrating it gets when one is forced to deal with a faulty scrypt)the errors go as follows:

1, Error: so intead i wrote a verses that cause calactalismic disaster/

1, Correction: instead i wrote verses

2, Err. one of your daughters is a slut, the other a raraging alcholic/

2, Correc. a raging alcholic

3, Err. is like aparthied where 10 percent decide the detiny/

3, Correc. decide the destiny

enjoy.............................ONE
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Tue Nov 09, 2004 3:24 pm

^ ^ ^ ^

l l l l



just uppin ..........................................................!
IyahminHotep
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Tue Nov 09, 2004 3:42 pm

Waddup Para!

Same frustrations over here though. I was going down ya verse and enjoying it. But it had something tooooo familiar to me though. I noticed you listen to Immortal Technique allot. You're verse would be much better without the lines wich seem as if you've bitten of or at least had some of his verses spinning in you're head while writing.

an example:

Tech says:

"It's like apartheid with 10% ruling the rest"

You say:

"Is like aparthied where 10 percent decide the destiny"

Brotha i am at no way dissing or anything near that cuz the lyrics stand out by themselves, yet too be a little more original in choice of words/sentences would give you're artistic integrity a firmer base. Naw mean?

Keep that Fire Blazing!!
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Tue Nov 09, 2004 9:58 pm

Hotep , good looks for the compliments, and the apartheid shit was a valid point, i can definately see how it can seem like Tech's line, and perhaps my subconcious was influanced by it, its also possible that i might be nourishing from thesame intellectual sources that Tec is, whatever be the cause shit just sounded right at the moment of inspiration, however i appriciate your insight...............ONE
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Wed Nov 10, 2004 2:06 am

But like the candle i steady keep the fire on wax /
that one is like,,, thats damn ,,, thats an ill ass line
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Wed Nov 10, 2004 9:32 am

I echo sentiments by practical from across the border,

my words will leave a sour taste in u like eating bicarbonate of soda,

things i did not understand way back but do now coz i grew older,

people in western countries really look like ogres,

lies told thru tv coz no channel caters for africa on a c-band decoder,

i do not think its anything nu coz u already know,

if u don't i urge u to listen to X radio.

where i battle with emceez to their fate like an hiv patient,

cease their lives quickly like a qari insurgent
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Wed Nov 10, 2004 4:47 pm

daaaaaaaaaaaaaamn!!! - man that real tight!!! real
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Thu Nov 11, 2004 1:06 pm

And slave masters fighting for freedom is oxymoronic/

TERRRIBBLE!!!!! Luv it!!

Keep it up!

Hotep!
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Thu Nov 11, 2004 11:17 pm

just uppin......................i'll touch it later , keep the revolutionary flags up high up above the stupidity comrades! ONE, and good looks on the props. ONEmo'time
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