eljodi vs kizito (Ready for votes)

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eljodi
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Sat Aug 22, 2009 9:45 am

one round, 16 lines, 3votes, shuld do. well here it goes.
eljodi
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Sat Aug 22, 2009 10:10 am

kick a verse kick a verse kick a verse sixteen, kick a verse thats polite and a verse thats mean, you little prick thinks its the best way out, cant read the sign exit, the way out is my mouth, so listen kizzy go change your name to lizzy, cuz i might live you stung like a new bee(newbie) ,i got more action than a verb, the dictonary came asking me for new words, if you want some amo render,eljodi i'll be the battle ryhme bender, nobody's offender, we only got two but am the fourth gender, you can be the third if you got ish to render, try not to waste time like a clock without batterys, this is just a pistol you shuld come with an artillery,you say you down to earth go mingle with the worms, this battle is like you taking a wrong turn..
Kizito
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Sun Aug 23, 2009 4:44 pm

well a call out would have been polite..

i been idol for a while now so ya.. i'll jump on it..

thats my check... will post either later today or... early tommorow..

i hope
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Fri Aug 28, 2009 8:06 am

El.. do u vote? put up ur link.. please!! also.. if u may.. revise ur verse...

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Kizito
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Mon Jan 18, 2010 10:52 am

I'm hotter than hell, probly/

we beefing you brought brokly/

MC is to AHH so is Losing to L jodi/

Kick 16 i dont need to, i do 8 & still eat you/

my bars so rich, u'll eat ths & shit crystals/

f*k it? wats that a meta4? clock without batteries?/jeez :oops:

how abt ur rhythms lifeless like ur heart is witout arteries/

u already f*ked up saying fuck you wud be adultery!!/

i kept forgeting to hit back.. so i just freestyled this 8 bar.. to get it done with.
eljodi
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Sat Aug 07, 2010 9:16 pm

nice one brof,, lets see 4d votes though its obvious who won
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Sun Sep 05, 2010 11:29 am

[quote name="eljodi"] so listen kizzy go change your name to lizzy, cuz i might live you stung like a new bee(newbie) .[/quote]

humorous diss!

okay

eljodi rhyme

el similes

[quote name="el"] you can be the third if you got ish to render, try not to waste time like a clock without batterys & this battle is like you taking a wrong turn..[/quote]

el metaphores

[quote name="el"]you say you down to earth go mingle with the worms[/quote]

non wordplay

kizito aggression

the whole verse was directed to el (nice)

overal el....(CLOSE ONE THOUGH)
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Sun Sep 26, 2010 8:35 pm

I would definitely have to say Kizito took this on most if not all cats. Eljodi's structure made it hard to even know where a line began & ended.
you little prick thinks its the best way out, cant read the sign exit, the way out is my mouth
no homo?

This woulda been a set up for a dope flip, i'm just saying.

but final vote: Kizito
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