The Conscious thread: Let keep this shit on track

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Wed Sep 06, 2006 11:19 am

Tight drop Quantum. Keep inkin it blood
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Thu Sep 14, 2006 11:29 am

Black star fire to your devotion

Shed the light, let our minds emulate

Cos ma people need to elevate and relocate away from this poverty state

Its hard being black youth in slums cos even ma mum is illiterate

People still uninformed cos the system can’t properly educate

In search for a brighter living they conflict with the police state

From prostitution to drug trafficking, officials will never relate

That’s why development in our townships, nigger is always late

But what confusing is that niggers were also born and breed without a full plate

That was during Apartheid, before BEE was a trophy or some piece of cake

Before greed and corruption from these parliamentary fakes

Before the triangle we broke, before government was rectangular shape

Now mother fuckers are raising the stakes

People can’t afford to live, nigger it’s a shame

There said free water for all, but by 4 am pipes they shut ‘em all

We don’t even have money for rates

Houses are like isolation cells, but still they place us in these holes

From work they displace us, cos in outskirts we find our homes

Fuck nigger this ain’t a prose, it’s the real situation I pose

The system I expose, cos on elections are minds are prone

That’s why I’m subscribing to this microphone; wake up ma people like Alexender Pope

Cos I got love for ma government that why I ignite like the only star during the night

Even though economically we doing a bit right

These social ills ain’t light, so come on help us curse the plight

Revolution will never be televised, so that’s why nigger this shit I’ll always write
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Fri Sep 15, 2006 10:58 am

krs must have been talking about this when he said "the real hip hop is over here"

god damn, i'm inspired!


Black star fire to your devotion

Shed the light, let our minds emulate

Cos ma people need to elevate and relocate away from this poverty state

Its hard being black youth in slums cos even ma mum is illiterate

People still uninformed cos the system can’t properly educate

In search for a brighter living they conflict with the police state

From prostitution to drug trafficking, officials will never relate

That’s why development in our townships, nigger is always late

But what confusing is that niggers were also born and breed without a full plate

That was during Apartheid, before BEE was a trophy or some piece of cake

Before greed and corruption from these parliamentary fakes

Before the triangle we broke, before government was rectangular shape

Now mother fuckers are raising the stakes

People can’t afford to live, nigger it’s a shame

There said free water for all, but by 4 am pipes they shut ‘em all

We don’t even have money for rates

Houses are like isolation cells, but still they place us in these holes

From work they displace us, cos in outskirts we find our homes

f*ck nigger this ain’t a prose, it’s the real situation I pose

The system I expose, cos on elections are minds are prone

That’s why I’m subscribing to this microphone; wake up ma people like Alexender Pope

Cos I got love for ma government that why I ignite like the only star during the night

Even though economically we doing a bit right

These social ills ain’t light, so come on help us curse the plight

Revolution will never be televised, so that’s why nigger this shit I’ll always write
BEESTING NGCWELE SBALI, UVUTH'UMLILO
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Fri Sep 15, 2006 11:09 am

BEESTING NGCWELE SBALI, UVUTH'UMLILO
Moja blood. Thanks for recognizing main.
mmmrepha
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Fri Sep 15, 2006 2:58 pm

I feel what u saying

Our people are always praying

For the right foundation to build a future so we can start brick laying

But the government never pulls through for *u-dakhi

We Always at the back of a bakie

Building empires for those who wear khakhi

Strengthen our melanin to give us protection from apartheid’s son

pinky, ring, middle, index, thumb come together to become one

Previously forced to lighten our skin with their silly crayons

Black coals oppressed till we became hard now shine like diamonds

Thanx to the eradication of Bantu education

I know that ‘keeping it real is all about mind elevation

Being proud of my skin,

and helping my next of kin

Cause only I understand the situation that he’s in

Given this equation, it’s up to us to solve this problem

Can’t really rely on our present system to Resolve them

Cause it’s not in their best interest

They gain more if they invest

Over the shore beyond mount Kilimanjaro’s hillcrest...

*BLACK MAN
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Fri Sep 15, 2006 5:10 pm

Tight scripts blood. UnguMrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrpha woqobo mfana. Ngigcwele over nami my brother.

And these lines I felt them to bits.
Thanx to the eradication of Bantu education

I know that ‘keeping it real is all about mind elevation

Being proud of my skin,

and helping my next of kin

Cause only I understand the situation that he’s in


Given this equation, it’s up to us to solve this problem

Can’t really rely on our present system to Resolve them

Cause it’s not in their best interest

They gain more if they invest

Over the shore beyond mount Kilimanjaro’s hillcrest...
Thats too ill (bold letters)

Korrek lova. Zingu 100 sezizonke. Moja
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Tue Oct 03, 2006 7:10 pm

When ma mind gets fully charged by electrified thots tht origin deep in ma heart\

I Take a look at this diction, bite a piece, go digest,

and recycle ma shit if there’s a feeding request.

Since freedom is a fiction story read to keep a black child motivated::

church, our hopes, our dreams,our haven/?

no hesitation, my soul has been built for moral combat,

until our relevance to this age has undoubtably been proven.

Once upon a time in humanity they punked the dark skin and labeled him a sin

coz like seeds we were all put in the field to grow

Beautifully matured with the word I bless the page/

dreams and aspirations remain a facade to ease minds of poor souls::

Odours of disgust are set free by me when pressure plays its part/

Revolution will never be televised, so that’s why nigger this shit I’ll always write
...plz read what you all wrote, a line from here a line from there.

I luvd it..

the end comes when an intended king returns to his thrown***

deceptive power re-captured from peasants, I realise now that I'm on my own*

if only I'd known sooner, that the minds would be infested by brands like adidas and puma**

no telling whether I wouldn't have developed a brain tumour***

blessed enuff, with the Creator's chosen seeds I puffed***

I staggered...and found refuge at AHH where they were starting to sprout***

thick mist rapidly cleared by some people I called emcees***

then I gave thanks to them for lettin' me see, what they saw***

some were down to earth, others flew on borrowed wings***

found solace, upon deciding I'd quit my job***

accused by the flippen snobs, theft of all things***

...then the cyber center closed, before I reached completion of this writing*

peace y'all.
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Wed Oct 04, 2006 11:37 am

@Antiklowize: Tight spits man. Like the way you put the lines. Keep elevating blood.
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Wed Oct 18, 2006 7:26 am

Im a first timer... never done this before!!

never rapped... but have been inspired by rap many times.. like i have just now.. reading your work.

going to give it a try...

so, start with the last line??

uumm... maybe i should get your help on how to write a rap first... or maybe ill just give it a shot :)

So, Quit stallin, on my count 1,2,3 now lets go

my first time, im a rap virgin, but ima let it flow

Who knows, i might inspire someone out there to grow

the right path to a brother this flow just might show

u better believe, thats exactly what happened to me

the lines of a killer emcee, got me questioning my lifes purpose, my journey

His rhymes are what enlightened and set me free

To soar and float and flutter, a gentle bird I’d be

Soar over war torn mountains, fly over a bloodstained sea

The first lesson I learnt was it would never be an easy journey

Might float like a butterfly, but damn, ive been stung by some bees,

Backstabbing, two timing.. hypocracy is their honey.

Its not an easy path, all you can do is learn,

With its winding twists, and bending curves

Through which we stumble, crawl and swerve…

But still we journey one and all, To start the quest and heed the call.

Sometimes the destination seems beyond our reach,

To touch the freedom, the faith we got to keep…

If we want freedom from war, death and pain. freedom to think again.

Let our lights shine, and inspire others to do the same.

Use this rap game. Its about sharing, who cares about the fame.

Concsious rap. You got to Be the change. Let them know

1,2,3… lets go, whos down with the earthly flow?
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Wed Oct 18, 2006 7:27 am

oh my god... just posted that onto the wrong page... thats how clueless i am
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