K9 have tha ideas but tha way you put them suckz...building criticism....Let me qoute...
You said "I'm hot you are not so call me a geyser"...what did you mean by that ??
"U probably asked your mom wat da hell a Messiah is//
So she gave u a bitchslap and said mind your biz"..
You not making sense bra!! i gotta be honest with ya..
"Tupac bit my lyrics for 2 my unborn child"
See what i mean....what is that???
South African Battle
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THIS WAS MY LAST POST IN THIS SITE, I HAVE TO GO AND FOCUS ON THE OTHER SIDE OF MY ART
You can still catch me dropping lines in the following posts
- The real hip hop is over here.... (KRS1)
- Eternal Thread
- What's your contribution to this culture
I'd still appreciate your comments about the lines i drop in these threads, so I can Keep growing....
GET REDDDEEY[/size]
JESUS the return[/size]
where y'all gonna be?
You can still catch me dropping lines in the following posts
- The real hip hop is over here.... (KRS1)
- Eternal Thread
- What's your contribution to this culture
I'd still appreciate your comments about the lines i drop in these threads, so I can Keep growing....
GET REDDDEEY[/size]
JESUS the return[/size]
where y'all gonna be?
Sho Rhymetodie I feel wat u sayin, thanx 4 da critisism it helpin me grow. Kodwa da thing is I'm still a lil kid in his mid teens so I've still got time 2 grow, which is why I appreciate it wen cats critisize me. Cats plz be like my boy Rhymetodie and keep critisizing.
Peace 2 my boy Masindi P, it was real fun battlin u dude. Yeah I remember mr green from dat dude 3-G.
Now as for Silence...
Silence exercise your name and shut da fcuk up//
Coz u battlin me so u gon get fcuked up//
My style is ill and best believe that I'm contagious//
You're whack and your crew is full of masturbators//
I must admit your shit was aight for a first verse//
But as da author of dis page u I gotta disperse//
I'm sure you've heard that my first verses are in 8//
So go on and join your boys while they choke their snakes//
Peace 2 my boy Masindi P, it was real fun battlin u dude. Yeah I remember mr green from dat dude 3-G.
Now as for Silence...
Silence exercise your name and shut da fcuk up//
Coz u battlin me so u gon get fcuked up//
My style is ill and best believe that I'm contagious//
You're whack and your crew is full of masturbators//
I must admit your shit was aight for a first verse//
But as da author of dis page u I gotta disperse//
I'm sure you've heard that my first verses are in 8//
So go on and join your boys while they choke their snakes//
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You forgot about the exlamationmarks at the end of my name
so if i exercise it, everyone on this site will be a stain
From wherever you crawled out, yo, go the hell in
cause your rhyming is about just as bad as your spelling!
What do you talk about a crew, man i move solo
turning emcees like you into crippled Qausimodo
but I'm thinking now if it's a good idea to rip thee
cause I'm not a pedophile, i don't exercise force on someone in their midteens
cause their brains has not developed yet, about as small as bakedbeans
Talking bout masturbation, man, you've entered a man's game
exposing your irritations , it's flat out mad shame
Why are using words like (fcuk!) in your rhymes. There's no need to be profane
I'm a lion kid, you're were just brushing my mane...
so if i exercise it, everyone on this site will be a stain
From wherever you crawled out, yo, go the hell in
cause your rhyming is about just as bad as your spelling!
What do you talk about a crew, man i move solo
turning emcees like you into crippled Qausimodo
but I'm thinking now if it's a good idea to rip thee
cause I'm not a pedophile, i don't exercise force on someone in their midteens
cause their brains has not developed yet, about as small as bakedbeans
Talking bout masturbation, man, you've entered a man's game
exposing your irritations , it's flat out mad shame
Why are using words like (fcuk!) in your rhymes. There's no need to be profane
I'm a lion kid, you're were just brushing my mane...
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[quote name="Masindi_P"]THIS WAS MY LAST POST IN THIS SITE, I HAVE TO GO AND FOCUS ON THE OTHER SIDE OF MY ART
You can still catch me dropping lines in the following posts
- The real hip hop is over here.... (KRS1)
- Eternal Thread
- What's your contribution to this culture
I'd still appreciate your comments about the lines i drop in these threads, so I can Keep growing....
Blessings man! What's the other side of your art? That KRS1 site, is that Temple of Hip hop?
GET REDDDEEY[/size]
JESUS the return[/size]
where y'all gonna be?[/quote]
You can still catch me dropping lines in the following posts
- The real hip hop is over here.... (KRS1)
- Eternal Thread
- What's your contribution to this culture
I'd still appreciate your comments about the lines i drop in these threads, so I can Keep growing....
Blessings man! What's the other side of your art? That KRS1 site, is that Temple of Hip hop?
GET REDDDEEY[/size]
JESUS the return[/size]
where y'all gonna be?[/quote]
[quote name="rhymetodie"]Masindi_P slash K-9 why ya seeking attention like Sunday Morning Church bellz
Coz to me ya more fucked than amabanjwa amatsha in a jail cell
Masindi_P how can u be amazing when ya left out standing in the cold
Ya jesus scripts you drop are old so all you see is dust when they are told
Kid ill crack your dome in two an leave you with splitting head aches
He brakes his neck 4 Marawa so every time he drops a moemish he still has mistakes
Let me pull out the crayons n type cause im about to wax this chump
Straight lumps I produce when I come with grace an begin to thump
You couldn’t be boiling hot kid if you sat on a stove top inside a E.C Three legged pot
Soon to corrode an rot when I bring this decay an start to lace the spot
Goliath top notch? I think not, this kid text is weak like bad knees he just frails
How can u inflict on body parts when ya tail tucked between ya legs u a Makhaya Ntini's fan don’t make me get into details
K9 it’s like I was standing here numb cause I aint feeling a thing you drop
U couldn’t look "gifted" if I wrapped u in wrapping paper with a bow on top
To my dismay cremating me to dust is the only way u could blow me away
Your just prey, I Serve you with more PUNCH an longer LINES than a buffet
What!![/quote]
Aaaaah Shiiiiiiiiit! Yo yo yoooo! Rhyme you killed it! MASINDI, nice one chana, you not hating and shit, instead givin props! You rock!
Coz to me ya more fucked than amabanjwa amatsha in a jail cell
Masindi_P how can u be amazing when ya left out standing in the cold
Ya jesus scripts you drop are old so all you see is dust when they are told
Kid ill crack your dome in two an leave you with splitting head aches
He brakes his neck 4 Marawa so every time he drops a moemish he still has mistakes
Let me pull out the crayons n type cause im about to wax this chump
Straight lumps I produce when I come with grace an begin to thump
You couldn’t be boiling hot kid if you sat on a stove top inside a E.C Three legged pot
Soon to corrode an rot when I bring this decay an start to lace the spot
Goliath top notch? I think not, this kid text is weak like bad knees he just frails
How can u inflict on body parts when ya tail tucked between ya legs u a Makhaya Ntini's fan don’t make me get into details
K9 it’s like I was standing here numb cause I aint feeling a thing you drop
U couldn’t look "gifted" if I wrapped u in wrapping paper with a bow on top
To my dismay cremating me to dust is the only way u could blow me away
Your just prey, I Serve you with more PUNCH an longer LINES than a buffet
What!![/quote]
Aaaaah Shiiiiiiiiit! Yo yo yoooo! Rhyme you killed it! MASINDI, nice one chana, you not hating and shit, instead givin props! You rock!
i could drop a verse so 'FAST', your 'HEARTS' will have to 'SKIP 2 BEATS' to get it/
the 'NUCLEUS OF CONCLUSIONS', 'GRAVITY' of the 'UNDERGROUND', the 'CONSCIOUS'/
you're more disgusting like 'GENTLEMEN' on first dates 'PICKING NOSES'/
i'm talkin 'COOL', lookin 'CALM' and 'WRITIN FEROCIOUS'/
the only time my eyes are WIDE OPEN is when 'LOOKIN ANXIOUS'/
cut your gals 'UMBILICAL CORD' and have your child 'FALL OUT HER CUNT'/
K9 you so 'B1TCH', truck drivers 'OFFER YOU LIFTS'/ (Chill chana, jus spittin!)
i leave 'you' so 'DEMOTIVATED' u'll have to go for a 'FACE-LIFT'/
if i said the 'WORD' b1tch in front of you, you'd 'FROWN' and 'LOOK AROUND'/
i rock so unbelievable, you'll 'CHOKE' from your own 'BREATH'/
I'll blow 'IRLL' a kiss that'll IMPLODE-HIS-FACE, he's the only 'FACELESS' bastard who cant 'ROCK THIS SHIT'/
i'm so arrogant with 'PUNCHES', i want to make 'EVERY' slut play 'RUGGER'/
if i told MASINDI i'm the 'LION OF JUDA', he'd go on his KNEES and apologise for 'STEALIN SUGAR'/
i'll beat you with 'BIBLE PAGES', touch your face and u'll be 'FEELING' my 'SCRIPTS'/
if i offered RHYME2DIE a career in 'UNDERTAKING' he'd change his 'ALIAS'/
your level of consciousness traveled 'ANALOGOUS' from the cave-men 'ERA'/
if i had to whisper u my 'VERSES', you'd start speaking in 'TONGUES'/
i could give you a 'NINE' and you wouldn't 'CLICK' it like your XHOSA 'TONES'
Haai, i jus thought i cud add somethin, i'm stickin to tha basics holmes...no hate! keep goin!
the 'NUCLEUS OF CONCLUSIONS', 'GRAVITY' of the 'UNDERGROUND', the 'CONSCIOUS'/
you're more disgusting like 'GENTLEMEN' on first dates 'PICKING NOSES'/
i'm talkin 'COOL', lookin 'CALM' and 'WRITIN FEROCIOUS'/
the only time my eyes are WIDE OPEN is when 'LOOKIN ANXIOUS'/
cut your gals 'UMBILICAL CORD' and have your child 'FALL OUT HER CUNT'/
K9 you so 'B1TCH', truck drivers 'OFFER YOU LIFTS'/ (Chill chana, jus spittin!)
i leave 'you' so 'DEMOTIVATED' u'll have to go for a 'FACE-LIFT'/
if i said the 'WORD' b1tch in front of you, you'd 'FROWN' and 'LOOK AROUND'/
i rock so unbelievable, you'll 'CHOKE' from your own 'BREATH'/
I'll blow 'IRLL' a kiss that'll IMPLODE-HIS-FACE, he's the only 'FACELESS' bastard who cant 'ROCK THIS SHIT'/
i'm so arrogant with 'PUNCHES', i want to make 'EVERY' slut play 'RUGGER'/
if i told MASINDI i'm the 'LION OF JUDA', he'd go on his KNEES and apologise for 'STEALIN SUGAR'/
i'll beat you with 'BIBLE PAGES', touch your face and u'll be 'FEELING' my 'SCRIPTS'/
if i offered RHYME2DIE a career in 'UNDERTAKING' he'd change his 'ALIAS'/
your level of consciousness traveled 'ANALOGOUS' from the cave-men 'ERA'/
if i had to whisper u my 'VERSES', you'd start speaking in 'TONGUES'/
i could give you a 'NINE' and you wouldn't 'CLICK' it like your XHOSA 'TONES'
Haai, i jus thought i cud add somethin, i'm stickin to tha basics holmes...no hate! keep goin!
Sup yall .still new on this room but yo ,ya all tight
not gonna drop anythin now , im still wack just gonna watch and learn first.
Cool[/b]
not gonna drop anythin now , im still wack just gonna watch and learn first.
Cool[/b]
jittaz bashinz back with rhymez unfamiliar 2 u like double-storey shacks/
here 2 bring yo spirits down 2 that level of a dog caught stealin eggz//
breakin necks 2 those who drink beer knowing that its here 2 destroy blacks//and 2 help the white men dance//
now that Masindi_p (Jesus)has left//
and u all waitin 4 his return//
i decided 2 take this chance to prove the fact//
that inda absence of da best/
even da worst can be da best/
I might have come uninvited, but im still a guest/
u gotta treat me with respect/
coz i got masters in rap-ology/
ndiyayazi lento andiyi foji/
i know hip hop maths/
quality rhmez + meaningful lyrics = a verse/
all hiphop students get their skillz from bashin/
here 2 bring yo spirits down 2 that level of a dog caught stealin eggz//
breakin necks 2 those who drink beer knowing that its here 2 destroy blacks//and 2 help the white men dance//
now that Masindi_p (Jesus)has left//
and u all waitin 4 his return//
i decided 2 take this chance to prove the fact//
that inda absence of da best/
even da worst can be da best/
I might have come uninvited, but im still a guest/
u gotta treat me with respect/
coz i got masters in rap-ology/
ndiyayazi lento andiyi foji/
i know hip hop maths/
quality rhmez + meaningful lyrics = a verse/
all hiphop students get their skillz from bashin/
"K9 it’s like I was standing here numb cause I aint feeling a thing you drop"
Rhymetodie is on fire, this was hot son
Yo Silence I left the exclamation marks out yet again//
Jus 2 prove I'm not feelin u, u not my friend//
I'm chillin here dissin u wit some rhymes that I wrote//
But even if I smoked u, u still wouldn't be dope//
Where's my favourite one hit wonder Rhymetodie//
He only drops one ill punch in a whole V-E-R-S-E//
This is my last line jus reppin for all heads//
I'm on another level so yall gotta change your gears//
Fellas I'll b da first to admit that this verse was da worst shit ever to come outta my head but its jus stress yall. I'ma start writin exams soon so I aint focussed on my hip-hop. Jus lettin yall know that Ima be gone 4 bout a month I MIGHT post on w-ends so keep doing yall's thing. When I come back Ima be killin niggaz strong. Teezer u gon b lucky I didn't get ya back for [email protected] other shit. Ima b back 4 u son.
Peace and luv to y'all.
S.A Hip-hop for life
WATCH OUT MY BOYS ENTITY ARE DROPPIN SOON AND YALL NEED TO HEAR THESE BOYS, THEY'RE CRAZY ILL. KEEP YALL'S EARS OPEN.
PEACE!
Rhymetodie is on fire, this was hot son
Yo Silence I left the exclamation marks out yet again//
Jus 2 prove I'm not feelin u, u not my friend//
I'm chillin here dissin u wit some rhymes that I wrote//
But even if I smoked u, u still wouldn't be dope//
Where's my favourite one hit wonder Rhymetodie//
He only drops one ill punch in a whole V-E-R-S-E//
This is my last line jus reppin for all heads//
I'm on another level so yall gotta change your gears//
Fellas I'll b da first to admit that this verse was da worst shit ever to come outta my head but its jus stress yall. I'ma start writin exams soon so I aint focussed on my hip-hop. Jus lettin yall know that Ima be gone 4 bout a month I MIGHT post on w-ends so keep doing yall's thing. When I come back Ima be killin niggaz strong. Teezer u gon b lucky I didn't get ya back for [email protected] other shit. Ima b back 4 u son.
Peace and luv to y'all.
S.A Hip-hop for life
WATCH OUT MY BOYS ENTITY ARE DROPPIN SOON AND YALL NEED TO HEAR THESE BOYS, THEY'RE CRAZY ILL. KEEP YALL'S EARS OPEN.
PEACE!
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