Countdown- whos down with it?

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Augustus Khan
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Sun Mar 12, 2006 5:28 am

I’m quick to knock self-righteous preachers off their soapboxes

And slap the vigor out of corpses displaying rigor mortis

The rhyme bender fluid flow verbal contortionist

Liquid sword welder horn blower of the apocalypse

Moving at the speed of sound, unearthing the underground

Mental jewel miner with a twenty-four hour turn around

Award winner for the most feasible dooms day device

Ventricles pump lava, auricle pumps ice

Pump action makes punks rise like the pump price of gasoline

Speed of thought rhyme processing carbon based machine

I rhyme therefore I am a self creating program

Burn down the wooden horse emancipate the Trojan

But leave me a quadruped to ride into the sunset

Triple optic vision to envision my final conquest

Dual divinity to move the soul when body needs rest

And one mic to show you all what it is I do best

if yáll noticed the last 4 bars are a countdown. so anyone feel like messing with this concept feel free to jump on it. doesnt have to be in the same context , it can be about anything as long as it counts down. think of this as an assignment for the best. :x
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Mon Mar 13, 2006 3:05 am

(Khan walks in to empty post. shakes head wandering where the real emcees are. walks out)
zero
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Mon Mar 13, 2006 3:55 am

nice line...
Speed of thought rhyme processing carbon based machine
couldnt let d thread die...i'ma keep it simple, i can't think...i'm half asleep

here's a true story,narrated by a tenth of my mind,

the other nine's been asleep long time!

my heart's been thumping so loud, i'd to spit to the beat

8 day's to exams & i ain't prepared for shit,

tense as F#*k, been that way since 7(am), when i woke up...

...after the 6th nightmare,when this ish gon' stop?

same semester,5th month, and there's no strikes kid!

next stop, senate building where i'ma crack 4 ribs

VC, both DVCs-i'ma get that trio,d last (rib) ripped of d security guard for tryna play d hero

<!reality check!> damn! i need to go read,(check's time) past 2(am)!!

fuck read! dang! i need to go sleep!

i'm out 1

-zero
Augustus Khan
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Mon Mar 13, 2006 5:15 am

:lol: crazy ish zero! goodluck with your exams man. now who else has got a useful "1/10th of the mind" to spare step up please!
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Mon Mar 13, 2006 4:04 pm

Dope concept...Zero gotta represent well in your exams like I did :lol: ..All the best brov..

Check out this shit..It sucks:

Ten is the rating I get when I drop lines on this site

Nine is wat I pull out when I come across nigguhs who shyte

Eight is the shape of my miss,she hot jus couldn't resist

to mention that.Where am I at.Yeah the number before six(downwards)

Seven,number of that x-united player who's freekicks is sick

Number of zeros on my paycheck has gotta be six(minimum) :wink:

While flipping biscuits I collide with cats while rock(y)ing at five

Going at nigguhs, going raw with them not knowing what for(4)

victory is what I aim for now counting down the big three

I'm the one, i'm fucking done...Oh yeah i'm left with

two one!!
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Mon Mar 13, 2006 6:48 pm

Tight from all o'yall....DAMN...

@ zero wht exams are u writin?
hooddie
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Wed Mar 15, 2006 3:49 am

10 mo' dayz 2reach da egg

shit dis is a tuf struggle

gotta survive~cant help bt strangle

a day gon~left wit 9dayz & 8fckin cellz ta kill

i spit shit all o'er~a xoul drpd off nw i gat 7 left

anoda drpd az d day goez by theft

ma 6th state of mind blossoms wen i gat 5 to go

feellin stronger dan eva~tis murder

knew i had da 4 aces as i gat 3milez ta flo

2died coz dey lack fluid

guess am da real 1 here
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Fri Mar 17, 2006 11:30 pm

I'm deemed necessary~since words add ingredients for any rappers delight

Cuz only "10" percent of the average man~pattern flows with their own creative insight

Far from the "Ninth" wonder~though Ehw's and Ahw's are steady released from Jaws

As figure-"eight"(infinity)processions of audience applaude like the sound of heavenly thunder

Victories exempt me from being a lost cause~As I battle in "7"-dimension(like gods)

Creating higher demand on hospital gauze~your heart skip'd "half a dozen"(6)beats~now you're in the ICU section

Have the weaker searchin' for new jobs~droppin' mics in a hurry

With the "nickel"-plated device hugged in my right-hand~that I might season the next man with like curry

If I'm cornered in a position~that lacks time for a decision..."4"-seconds tickin'...its either your head or mine

Another dead man outside~countin' the "two" from the other day~I guess this "one" makes a "triple" homicide...in an awOoF'd state uv mind(GwG)
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Mon Mar 20, 2006 4:29 am

dope ish from everyone. almost makes me feel like changing my verse. :)
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