She, notices how, the superstars wow whilst they writhe their bodies the same rhythm they writhe to, she writhes to too. to her, she knows it not, but her culture sheds its skin, and the structure thats exposed left no covering for whats within. She, notices how the superstars, bow to serve the beas...

hypothetical poetry manifest.

i believe writing when you are wedged in the thick of an emotion is.. this... poetry.

blessed be.

Honour

K

hmm.. i like how you put it out there simply..

your almost tess sentences add to the somberness of the piece.

and lastly there is an air of indifference... your fear 2011.. so much you cant run from it.

a, so what.. its going to come anyway.

nice..

i like..

Honour

K

I seek courage to confront these battles from all fronts that, torment me til' im paralysed in fear of mental shortcomings hope is forth coming but my heart is short sighted i being the fourth sighted of a breed rare from the start Marley, Luther, i, & the one to come. From the North, i battle pover...

I co-sign Xblaze mismatched

Apopyalips "Paralysed Rika"

He he he... Apopyalips!! its an honour to have you back here sir! my vote! Opener: Apopyalips "The complexity of ma sentenses got u diggin up words in thesaurus/ u can't match this "def" emcee even if u are a decendant of Lazarus/" is definately waaaay better than "suffix/ topics, nonexist/punches, ...

Full stop like the end of the word, probably is/ end of the world? no man its probably Kiz/ im hard rock cant punch my lines u probably kiss/ this shakespearian flow, i grind whilst you'r "so net"/(sonnet) u byte like ping requests, on kingly quests/ i leave, on a pilgrimage, i journey West/ like th...

[quote name="Couzifer"]The more of me I heap onto the galaxy's arms, the more I become who I am or I'm meant to be, by virtue of potential. So ride on, little poem, propel me past the stars. I'm settled for an identity, next to Frost, Soyinka and crew that make for Mars, Venus and other famous faces...

Dude.. write something i can turn into a short film script.. u good at this story telling thing

OK... It looks like LSD took this.. both kats been away for a while though.. both yo'll welcome back.. nice sparr



im gon lock up..

check out the other battles tht need votes..

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