This is soooo vividly niiiice. Such a sad and captivating story. Kinda reminds me of Alfred Noyes' poem - 'The highway man'- in your elements of love lost, 'commitments' we're bound to, and the misery of the latter haunting us with thoughts of "what could have been". Dunno if you know the poem, but...

'Sup fam.. This thread is actually a spinoff of Serious' poetry chain/collabo... Aside from encouraging feedback and participation, it's kind of a Guessing/Riddle game. Okay, here's how it goes: You write a 2 stanza (maximum) piece, in which you describe/personify something (never giving away what ...

^^ Yea you got it, Bee. This was keystyled, so please excuse my ramblings lol. You're just about on point in your analysis though: It's about having walked away from complications/disputes without really bothering to bring closure to them....just pushing them to the back of my mind, and that coward...

Wasn't too sure where to follow suit from, so i just went on from Bee's last few lines... So in the back of my mind I’ve learned to cope, and Accept any Heavenly work no matter what the scope God created us for a reason, and all will die, but some without legacy... That being said, God may as well ...

There's nothing I can say that everybody else hasn't mentioned. This being the popular topic that it is, Much props and respect are in order to you for giving us a fresh outlook on this. First stanza hit me hard, and set a standard you managed very well t maintain throughout the piece. Intense imag...

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