Oops... I called you Serious, didnt I...
I'm sorry, Seraph. lol
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- Wed Sep 05, 2007 2:44 pm
- Forum: Poetry / spoken word
- Topic: The dark side of the moon
- Replies: 10
- Views: 2313
- Wed Sep 05, 2007 2:30 pm
- Forum: Poetry / spoken word
- Topic: Game Plan...
- Replies: 26
- Views: 5667
Game Plan...
^^ Bingo, Nameless
Seraph, you were on the right track. good guess.
Okay, so that's how it goes... Fell free to give it a shot.
bless

Seraph, you were on the right track. good guess.
Okay, so that's how it goes... Fell free to give it a shot.
bless
- Tue Sep 04, 2007 1:52 pm
- Forum: Poetry / spoken word
- Topic: Game Plan...
- Replies: 26
- Views: 5667
Game Plan...
.....
lol
I oath, its pretty easy.
It doesn't have to be something you can see or feel.
Keywords:
Genre, Culture, Bars, Poetry, Rhythm and blues....
C'mon..
lol
I oath, its pretty easy.
It doesn't have to be something you can see or feel.
Keywords:
Genre, Culture, Bars, Poetry, Rhythm and blues....
C'mon..

- Tue Sep 04, 2007 1:44 pm
- Forum: Poetry / spoken word
- Topic: The dark side of the moon
- Replies: 10
- Views: 2313
The dark side of the moon
This is soooo vividly niiiice. Such a sad and captivating story. Kinda reminds me of Alfred Noyes' poem - 'The highway man'- in your elements of love lost, 'commitments' we're bound to, and the misery of the latter haunting us with thoughts of "what could have been". Dunno if you know the poem, but...
- Tue Sep 04, 2007 1:34 pm
- Forum: Poetry / spoken word
- Topic: Newbees, get in here :)
- Replies: 179
- Views: 76751
Newbees, get in here :)
Poeticchills and Ms Kelly, welcome to the forum.
Looking forward to checking out your material.
Have fun, Stay elevatin' and stay ACTIVE
bless
Looking forward to checking out your material.
Have fun, Stay elevatin' and stay ACTIVE

bless
- Tue Sep 04, 2007 1:26 pm
- Forum: Poetry / spoken word
- Topic: Game Plan...
- Replies: 26
- Views: 5667
Game Plan...
'Sup fam.. This thread is actually a spinoff of Serious' poetry chain/collabo... Aside from encouraging feedback and participation, it's kind of a Guessing/Riddle game. Okay, here's how it goes: You write a 2 stanza (maximum) piece, in which you describe/personify something (never giving away what ...
- Thu Aug 30, 2007 11:25 am
- Forum: Poetry / spoken word
- Topic: Poetry chain/collab: in the back of my mind
- Replies: 45
- Views: 10057
Poetry chain/collab: in the back of my mind
^^ Yea you got it, Bee. This was keystyled, so please excuse my ramblings lol. You're just about on point in your analysis though: It's about having walked away from complications/disputes without really bothering to bring closure to them....just pushing them to the back of my mind, and that coward...
- Wed Aug 29, 2007 12:21 pm
- Forum: Poetry / spoken word
- Topic: Poetry chain/collab: in the back of my mind
- Replies: 45
- Views: 10057
Poetry chain/collab: in the back of my mind
Wasn't too sure where to follow suit from, so i just went on from Bee's last few lines... So in the back of my mind I’ve learned to cope, and Accept any Heavenly work no matter what the scope God created us for a reason, and all will die, but some without legacy... That being said, God may as well ...
- Mon Aug 27, 2007 2:02 pm
- Forum: Poetry / spoken word
- Topic: Refugees
- Replies: 8
- Views: 2009
Refugees
There's nothing I can say that everybody else hasn't mentioned. This being the popular topic that it is, Much props and respect are in order to you for giving us a fresh outlook on this. First stanza hit me hard, and set a standard you managed very well t maintain throughout the piece. Intense imag...
- Wed Aug 22, 2007 3:14 pm
- Forum: Poetry / spoken word
- Topic: Poetry chain: my i.d.
- Replies: 38
- Views: 7923
Poetry chain: my i.d.
Biochemistry has more than regularly been sourced As my mortal criteria's essence, By clinical nations of anti-lucid beings. The subliminal quests they scheme Lynch what few naive dreams I still carry in the seams of my open mind's deep pocket of unexplained dreams... Let me live for my faculty's S...