Difrent and yet so so so beautiful.... he he he

I found my Puzzle piece.... She fits perfectly

Beautiful collaborated piece.... But i expected a more tragic ending... like one commiting suicide or one killing the both of them on sum "If i can't have you, nobody else can" ha ha ha.... just joking man. Two of of my favourite poets dropping mad venom on a computer screen. Beautiful

woooooaaaaawwww.... I'm blown away... nice drop dude... got me thinking about the present state in SA. Sad actually, but wat CAN the people do? Sad

Thanks Couzifer... and thank you poetic Seraph

sensitivity.... ha ha ha... if you don't like people criticking your pieces, don't post them. simple :mrgreen: :lol:

Angels do not have wings...

To Be perfectly honest, I was seriously contemplating quitting.... Being a poet is such a burden sometimes.... Waking up in the middle of the night just to write is just too ridiculous... am tired of the sleepless nights

Nice delivery... beautiful indeed!!! But did you have to end it like that with such a sore note on whites?

Ouch... such deep emotions!!!