[quote name="theme elohim"]Holding hands is a gesture of goodwill which on such a blistering afternoon cannot appease the sore eye I would rather were at war for the mere fascination of keeping with the infantile tradition than challenge the world's attention to a novelty as farcical as a dungbeetle...

[quote name="xy_monk"]when will our leaders follow dispassion..

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i've only got one word for this-

CLEVER

i had to look twice to get it

much love!!

trusoul

[quote name="intel"]my deepest apology: and remorse, bleeds across my sweat soaked cheek.... the tainted color is as the sky; corrosive as bleach.... i wish you could forgive me for reasons..truly, I'm not sorry. **You tell me its ok**...."shh baby..... dont speak." the silence draws me closer bonde...

[quote name="liquid fire"]im new to this forum, and i need your help to help me improve, so please, give me feedback... Me, the person within. I'ma tell you about a certain person, A living being within my body, matter of fact within my mind, His name is Me, not Liquid Fire, but Me. Me is the guy i ...

[quote name="N.u.d.i.v.a."]i'll keep that in mind,thanx.more feedback pls[/quote]

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something different, but cool all the same , i agree with addictive , the structuring is a bit of a turn off, work on that and the flow will work itself out, nicely done.

much love!!

trusoul

[quote name="rhymetodie"] [quote name="Loafsta boy"]who da hell iz feeling Psypho(wild room) and Crazy luther(that wanna be g who always wearing gangsta) . . . i feel sympathy for them they got deals but not talent[/quote] They worthless pieces of shit...both wack...i'm happy you brought tht subject...

[quote name="AddictiveSoul"] There you are Tru... was getting worried when you wouldn't emerge.. On point piece. Letz elevate :wink: [/quote] MY DEAR. I WAS WORRIED MYSELF, SINCE GETTING BACK TO SCHOOL IVE HIT A BIT OF A BLOCK, SEEMS I GET CURED, THANKS FOR WORRYING. much love!! trusoul :) :)

[quote name="TeeZeR"] [quote name="theme elohim"] this rooted depression swallows me whole like an emotion stilled by tears, peristalsis suspended until, with a sudden yet animated violence it somersaults into my archive of gut feelings... yes, it will be felt again when to cry is protest than simpl...

[quote name="TeeZeR"][ For me...Zubz is more like Mos Def and Talib Kweli...keeping it down, i got mad respect for him! But well that's jus me...what I think![/quote] i have to second that, zubz really des hold it down, not only in his lyrics but also in the way his voice carries, he rocks, he is ve...

[quote name="AddictiveSoul"][Hiphop probably aint really getting to the people too well as yet, coz although they do talk about relevant shyt like life ekasi or whateva - the way they're getting that message across to Mzansi cats is not effective. They're adopting the Americans' way of doing things....