i'll keep that in mind,thanx.more feedback pls

im gon make u bend over and kiss ur toes while ur abs bent forward

lol thanx for the feed back yall.apreciated.i'll surely complete the story,and wat got u confused??.any way,thanx once again.

more feeds pls

fuck training,only thing i practice is death,i'll push ur fore head to the back of ur chest

u still dont know wat structuring is.and bar length consistency

yo dude,dont start wat u cant finish.i aint got time for beef,just warning ya.only gays would keep on postin wack verses in secret.if u down for a match,i said u should just set it up and drop an open verse for ur allies to witness ur defeat.and talkin shit about im scared of u,, lol y should i?when...

this something i did of recent, creepin swiftly in a corner with darkness no light can shine, he opens the door like acheing wound and trys to on the light click! click!"damn its out! i gotta go find a match so i'd light on d lamp as he trys to turn around,he paused like he just heard a sound "oh,it...

nice piece dawg.need to work on ur structuring man and ur rhyme's re lil bit cheap but goo drop tho

nice drop dawg.but u use multis at times for the sake of em lol.anyway,good drop

peace

nice effort dawg.only needs better rhymes in it as uve got pottential.

peace