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by oxytim
Wed Dec 10, 2014 8:24 am
Forum: African Hip Hop Discussion
Topic: Checking in: who's still here from back in the days?
Replies: 23
Views: 2934

Checking in: who's still here from back in the days?

Damn its been long since I last visited this site. Looking forward to reading fresh new perspectives. Time to catch up on those missed words, and verses. 
by oxytim
Sat Nov 20, 2010 11:22 pm
Forum: Poetry / spoken word
Topic: Substance of a hug
Replies: 1
Views: 594

Substance of a hug

i need a hug, not to circle my hands around someone, i'd like a full embrace, where our faces meet, passionate kiss... exchange of happiness exchange of misery, exchange of bliss words of empathy, actions, ecstassy i'd like to once again feel, to cut lose this madness within, i'd like to feel free.....
by oxytim
Fri Oct 29, 2010 1:07 am
Forum: Poetry / spoken word
Topic: Blue Shadow
Replies: 1
Views: 470

Blue Shadow

i want to make you smile, like you make me, I'd like to inspire you, like you do me... If I could, I'd love for you to see yourself as through my eyes, To enjoy scenery of true beauty simply floating bye... Maybe take a glimpse of an amazing being, the girl with the lovely blue energy flowing, in th...
by oxytim
Fri Oct 29, 2010 1:03 am
Forum: Poetry / spoken word
Topic: The bud and the rose...
Replies: 0
Views: 429

The bud and the rose...

Yo, this is the continuation to the Poem "The Thorn and the Bud..." This time something was different. I had always known I was split. That my brain and heart were different. But usually they agreed. This time they didn’t, and for once, I chose to support my heart, it offered no immediate solutions ...
by oxytim
Fri Oct 29, 2010 12:57 am
Forum: Poetry / spoken word
Topic: Unspoken Pain
Replies: 14
Views: 2990

Unspoken Pain

I like the title... and the poem does nail it.
I sat down and started to think

That was my first mistake
I can relate to that... sometimes we curse why we put ideas into our own heads... we shud just proceed with the flow

Nice piece bro
by oxytim
Fri Oct 29, 2010 12:55 am
Forum: Poetry / spoken word
Topic: Love or lust
Replies: 9
Views: 1812

Love or lust

love or lust... lust i say...

But overall good write.
by oxytim
Wed May 26, 2010 1:37 pm
Forum: Poetry / spoken word
Topic: good run
Replies: 4
Views: 454

good run

Awesome piece there, i almost believed real... :D anyway. Dude hope you going better places, or for real good reasons. If none of the the above applies. Just say your going on a really long leave and not sure when you'll be back
by oxytim
Wed May 26, 2010 1:33 pm
Forum: Poetry / spoken word
Topic: Envy 2
Replies: 10
Views: 901

Envy 2

Interesting piece, someone realises the problem but is a little reluctant to change their actions and attitudes... When i read the first lines Why do i feel pain When i see ma brother gain I thought about betrayal, then Shouldn't i work hard So i can also get paid made me think of some one that real...
by oxytim
Wed May 26, 2010 1:25 pm
Forum: Poetry / spoken word
Topic: Hopes for ma country
Replies: 7
Views: 748

Hopes for ma country

This content of this piece is on point. This just about somes up all concepts, i've ever had about politics... or bad politics for this matter. Alot of cliched statements but u still pull it off as a piece, i give you respect for that. You read it and read it again. The form is really good, i must s...
by oxytim
Wed May 26, 2010 1:19 pm
Forum: Poetry / spoken word
Topic: de·cou·ple
Replies: 3
Views: 536

de·cou·ple

I really liked your wording all through though I felt like you didnt polish this up, plus you intended it to be in a different form. I like the enjambment you had going on, though I'd love to read this again, afetr you edit and structure it into formal poetry form coz i think it deserves that. I ag...