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by Poetic Seraph
Thu Jul 01, 2010 1:03 am
Forum: Poetry / spoken word
Topic: thaddeus made the call
Replies: 38
Views: 5247

thaddeus made the call

I once (way back) created an ahh fanpage... but i doubt we can use that for this. you should make a fb group; that way you can send a msg to all members at the same time, without having to click every person seperately or selecting them from your friends list. i can do it too, if you want? i'm on fb...
by Poetic Seraph
Thu Jul 01, 2010 12:57 am
Forum: Poetry / spoken word
Topic: Are we really all the same
Replies: 11
Views: 726

Are we really all the same

I agree with the others. very thought provoking, but the structure would indeed add to the poem!!
by Poetic Seraph
Thu Jul 01, 2010 12:47 am
Forum: Poetry / spoken word
Topic: Pardon my language
Replies: 4
Views: 714

Pardon my language

uhm ok.... short....like a single thought that happened to rhyme...
by Poetic Seraph
Thu Jul 01, 2010 12:41 am
Forum: Poetry / spoken word
Topic: What I Wanted to Write
Replies: 8
Views: 1076

What I Wanted to Write

vnorm i agree, but I think this one was written especially to be performed. it has this spoken word flow to it. there were some funny elements in the story and even though it was kinda long, it read fluently, it doesn't get boring at no point. i like it :)
by Poetic Seraph
Thu Jul 01, 2010 12:17 am
Forum: Poetry / spoken word
Topic: Gracious - ley (thought in a sec)
Replies: 5
Views: 599

Gracious - ley (thought in a sec)

i like the smooth flow of this piece; it reads like an observation of a brief moment when all stood still around you and you focused on just one thing; very nice
by Poetic Seraph
Thu Jul 01, 2010 12:11 am
Forum: Poetry / spoken word
Topic: Why do you write? (Poetry chain)
Replies: 59
Views: 6844

Why do you write? (Poetry chain)

I WRITE TO ESCAPE FROM REALNESS INTO REALITY
by Poetic Seraph
Thu Jul 01, 2010 12:09 am
Forum: Poetry / spoken word
Topic: The Great Awakening Part 1
Replies: 4
Views: 386

The Great Awakening Part 1

hmmm. short. you have some valid points in there but it seems very superficial. like you jotted down a few thing that you want to put in a future poem. if thats the case, im looking forward to the extended version :D
by Poetic Seraph
Wed Jun 16, 2010 1:08 pm
Forum: Poetry / spoken word
Topic: one line 7 words
Replies: 508
Views: 76743

one line 7 words

the ghetto is a state of mind
by Poetic Seraph
Sun May 30, 2010 9:03 pm
Forum: Poetry / spoken word
Topic: thaddeus made the call
Replies: 38
Views: 5247

thaddeus made the call

signing up for the league!