this is kinda lika sequel to "I made love to poetry"...so i finally came up with a title lol "I made love to a poet"

I was jus in the mood to write..and this is what i came up with...(i was actually thinking about this poet i have a secret crush on) He gave me some of his thoughts I guess I underestimated his Ability to seduce He let me sip on his mind juice Until I was inveigled by his truths Then he penetrated m...

too realistic

[quote name="fecko1"] [quote name="Serious Jokers Ent"]But no matter where u are, what situation ur in Never forget Beautiful black men U are forever kings Cuz ur skin trails ur roots back to Afrika Where it all begins... Copyright 2007 Poetic Seraph[/quote] Nice one! i'm definitely diggin that line...

hey you guys

thanx for takin the time to read ma stuff

i know i haven't been on as much ...but im startin to get busy tryin to finish school, and goin to prenatel classes....

[quote name="Serious Jokers Ent"]wow. this is a very emotional piece. i can feel the pain of things not said and then it's too late. I found this piece on page 21 and no one ever commented on it??? no wonder some people don't return...[/quote] so true..but i guess in my situation it would be differe...

very nice piece...especially because it's one that i can relate to

I MADE LOVE TO POETRY ON HILARY'S COLLEGED SYMMETRIC LINES HE AROUSED MY MIND SEDUCED MY THOUGHTS THEN LYRICALLY TONGUED MY THOUGHTS IN UNIQUE SYLLABLES UNTIL I FLOWED IN STANZAS IN POETIC PHRASES I SANG IN A VERBAL PRAISE AND HE SUCKED ON MY METOPHORICAL PHASES I MADE LOVE TO POETRY HE GENTLY TURNE...

What more does it take to leave him If you look into the mirror And see a beautiful woman With a black eye No, Don't excuse his abuse Make truth out of his lies Cause you'll be heading for A suicidal homicide You are your own temple And nobody own you but you You can fondation your bruises Colour yo...

Last two stanza's stuck out to me the most...especially the second last one. It seems the family cycle of black people now consists of a "young" black women (single parent) and one more children. And no matter how hard she tries to break the cycle...Her kids fall into the same cycle...Single mother ...